Just a random one shot I thought of while babysitting. I actually like it but what do you think? I've been really trying to do a better job with the details in my story so please tell me if I need more. Uh, please enjoy, thanks!
A Flash of Black
Red and orange flames erupted in the ash filled air, creating a horrible heat.
Most of the vikings had their eyes shielded from both but Stoick the Vast kept his eyes open, watching the barely visible jet black blur weaving in and out of the massive pale blue spikes that lined the gigantic beasts back, frantically trying to escape the growing flames.
The spiked tail of the 'Blue Deaths' had appeared suddenly due to the fantastic speed of the Night Fury… but on this occasion too fast.
Unable to understand why the ebony dragon wasn't turning away from the tail, Stoick watched in horror as it rammed straight into it, and as Stoick's only son was jerked free of the harness and fell.
Stoick heart stopped.
The dark sky was quickly disappearing in the wild flames, Hiccup's limp body falling right at it at a rapid speed.
The jet dragon was twisting wildly, straightening out his magnificent body, extending his massive wings, and flying straight for the falling boy, his stocky legs reaching-
…and then nothing…
Nothing but the fiery flames covering the night sky, the vikings covering their faces from the intense heat… and a flash of black.
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