THIS IS MY FIRST FAN FICTION! please review! Don't care if you don't like it, just REVIEW!:)))));)))$
He was standing there. Right In front of me. I could not believe that we were that close, and he smelled amazing. Like a mix of honey and lavender with something else I didn't recognize. I soon realized that we were still in the middle of the woods, right in the back of my house. He got closer to my face an I braced myself for a kiss. Then he hesitated and ran out of the woods, just leaving me there! I all the sudden felt a rush of anger, not bothering to wonder why. I started to walk back to my house where I found my dad on the couch, eating a sandwich, watching basketball. He was startled when he saw me, but then simply said, " oh hey how was school?" I answered " fine I guess " He went back to watching his game and I went up to my room. I pushed open the door and thought I was going to have a heart attack! There he was standing near my window, staring at me with his god golden like eyes. I thought I was going to scream but instead did that inside of me. I shut the door and made my way across the room. He slid his hands around my waist, noticing that I was confused, and pressed his lips to mine.
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