Ok im re-doing this the other one was way to corny
for my liking so here you go
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He ran as fast as he could but he could still here them trailing
slow behind...he looked around for somewhere to hide..no use
there was just no place....as he looked up he saw it, a bright white light
all he had to do was run for it.(the next paragraph is the people trailing behind him)
"WHERE DID THAT FOOL GO!?"The burly man screamed"captin we saw him run this way i cant sense his ki thought"another man said"well then you better try harder markus, if you dont want me to kick your ass"the captin said"yes sire"markus squeaked.
'Its a good thing they cant sense me other wise they would have caught me'Nariyu thought.(this is the part where you learn what the hell is going on)Nariyu was born in Tokyo, Japan(so he thinks hehe) on may 7th 1986, beautiful black hair with very small spikes going every which way, he has long narrow black ear like a wolfs, blue eyes, and a black tail. His parents never told him the truth about where he was from..but as he grew up he learned on his own that there was something different about him unlike other kids he hung out with. While growing up it wasnt easy, kids would make fun of him for his ears and tail..after countless nights of crying he finely accepted the fact that he was different than everyone else until one day......(so now begins are story of how he got into the mess you read earlier)
As Nariyu walked by several blue lockers, and groups of snickering kids he had finally reached the place he was looking for..room 102(english class)as he walked in he noticed how the kids became all quiet and watched as he walked to his desk. (Nariyu has no friends but thats gonna change in about 2 minutes tops)As class began the teachered started to announce something"ok class we have a new student she is from hong kong"the teachered shouted Nariyu watched as the door opened as it did a girl with beautiful blue hair walked in(no im not using bulma from dbz but i love her hair) she was one inch shorted then him long slender legs, a tiny waist, she was wearing a t-shirt that was white, a gray hat and black denim shorts with a pair of black low top converse shoes."so miss why dont you tell the class your name"mrs.turner said"my name is Miko"Miko pronounced"well why dont you take a seat next to the young man over there"mrs.turner pointed out toward Nariyu.(now im skipping to a couple of days later). As days progressed Miko was constantly picked on and made fun of / 1.cause of the color of her hair and / 2. the fact she never took her hat off / 3. she never talked to anyone.(oh just so you know Nariyu wears a hat to cover his ears up)
As Miko walked she noticed how the kids were whispering about her she just smirked'you guys wait thats when you will regret making fun of me'Miko thought to herself as she laughed out loud catching everyone's attention including Nariyu. She looked down and didnt notice that she was about to run into Nariyu but before she could stop BANG. Nariyu looked down Miko had ran into him."oops sorry"Miko stated"its alright your miko right"Nariyu asked(they never really got to know each other)"yes and your Nariyu right"Miko stated"yeah so since i ran into you do you want to go to lunch period with me"Nariyu said"well now that you mention it sure i dont mind skipping class"Miko said cheerfully.
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So how do you like it so far well its a little boring but the next chapter is going to be more cooler cause nariyu and miko learn a couple of new things about each other!! plz review
for my liking so here you go
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He ran as fast as he could but he could still here them trailing
slow behind...he looked around for somewhere to hide..no use
there was just no place....as he looked up he saw it, a bright white light
all he had to do was run for it.(the next paragraph is the people trailing behind him)
"WHERE DID THAT FOOL GO!?"The burly man screamed"captin we saw him run this way i cant sense his ki thought"another man said"well then you better try harder markus, if you dont want me to kick your ass"the captin said"yes sire"markus squeaked.
'Its a good thing they cant sense me other wise they would have caught me'Nariyu thought.(this is the part where you learn what the hell is going on)Nariyu was born in Tokyo, Japan(so he thinks hehe) on may 7th 1986, beautiful black hair with very small spikes going every which way, he has long narrow black ear like a wolfs, blue eyes, and a black tail. His parents never told him the truth about where he was from..but as he grew up he learned on his own that there was something different about him unlike other kids he hung out with. While growing up it wasnt easy, kids would make fun of him for his ears and tail..after countless nights of crying he finely accepted the fact that he was different than everyone else until one day......(so now begins are story of how he got into the mess you read earlier)
As Nariyu walked by several blue lockers, and groups of snickering kids he had finally reached the place he was looking for..room 102(english class)as he walked in he noticed how the kids became all quiet and watched as he walked to his desk. (Nariyu has no friends but thats gonna change in about 2 minutes tops)As class began the teachered started to announce something"ok class we have a new student she is from hong kong"the teachered shouted Nariyu watched as the door opened as it did a girl with beautiful blue hair walked in(no im not using bulma from dbz but i love her hair) she was one inch shorted then him long slender legs, a tiny waist, she was wearing a t-shirt that was white, a gray hat and black denim shorts with a pair of black low top converse shoes."so miss why dont you tell the class your name"mrs.turner said"my name is Miko"Miko pronounced"well why dont you take a seat next to the young man over there"mrs.turner pointed out toward Nariyu.(now im skipping to a couple of days later). As days progressed Miko was constantly picked on and made fun of / 1.cause of the color of her hair and / 2. the fact she never took her hat off / 3. she never talked to anyone.(oh just so you know Nariyu wears a hat to cover his ears up)
As Miko walked she noticed how the kids were whispering about her she just smirked'you guys wait thats when you will regret making fun of me'Miko thought to herself as she laughed out loud catching everyone's attention including Nariyu. She looked down and didnt notice that she was about to run into Nariyu but before she could stop BANG. Nariyu looked down Miko had ran into him."oops sorry"Miko stated"its alright your miko right"Nariyu asked(they never really got to know each other)"yes and your Nariyu right"Miko stated"yeah so since i ran into you do you want to go to lunch period with me"Nariyu said"well now that you mention it sure i dont mind skipping class"Miko said cheerfully.
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So how do you like it so far well its a little boring but the next chapter is going to be more cooler cause nariyu and miko learn a couple of new things about each other!! plz review