Hey, this is my first ff and I'm not an English native speaker – tying something I always wanted to try out (an ff)with something I always had fun with(English) :D so please excuse my typos and maybe give me some advice if someone that is native speaking is willing to help be that would be nice to . KK Thx
Also FemNaru!
Ps Also.. eh there maybe some cliché happening … probably.. almost certain.
Pps: I love the right to live by Eilwynn probably going to be some similarity but I try to keep that in check don't want to rewrite something I'm just going with a similar theme :3
Its in the middle of a rainy night in Konohagakure its been rainy for the last few days and today as well, just this time the rain is accompanied by shining lightning and loud thunder, the wind is howling and its all in all a really really uncomfortable night nobody would want to go outside at such a time. She is hanging at then wall like always, long dirty hair frames her face, which is more just skin over her skull, the hair rolls down her back until its reaching the ground, her body is small and undernourished every bone is visible beneath her skin. She seams to be awake the sunken eyes with big blue pupils are starring at a crack in the wall, the wooden wall is old and brittle, the eyes stare at the crack and they are following the raindrops falling down – the Girl hangs there without a sound in the middle of this rainy night.
The Three
"I hate the rain" says one of the Three in an annoyed voice "It's so slippery." tones another voice similar annoyed – than there is a Third voice "Why do we have to do this cant she just hang there when it rains its not like anybody cares at all.." This is spoken in a whispering tone to the other two people all 3 are looking around for a moment and two look at the third disapproving "Don't talk about this to loud." It comes hissing form both and she nods rolling her eyes.
Girl
The Door opens, I heard them coming and talking ..of course I did I heard a lot, but I didn't care what they said I felt nothing and nothingness filled me. All 3 of them were in normal clothes over which each of them wore an old apron also all 3 of them had an bucket with them 2 filled with Water one with food, one of the Women she called her "Mouse" because she had such a pointy and long noose she took a step back and swings her bucket at me water splashed at me and I cough loudly my waste that mad a small puddle under me is washed away with the water into a hole in the middle of the ground I blink a few times – the other two make a big semicircle around the hole determinant not to go anywhere near it they free me form the chains that hold me and I fall to the ground nobody bothers about the painful grunt I make its like this everyday.
Mouse
She is a Monster – I recall as a faint flickering of guilt shakes me and I shrug it off If been doing this for 5 Years now under the order of the matron of course I was shocked first such a small child but when I heard who she was I wished her an even worse fate, still we had to care for her at least for now because the Hokage told us to, he doesn't know HOW we treat her but he must hate her as much as we do so it's probably alright at least that's what the matron told us, he sees only the value of the Monster for later times she told us, and no matter what we believed it all of us lost someone in the attack of that Monster its just fair to treat her like this.. - I Shake as I'm shaken out of my thoughts by a painful grunt as the Monster falls on the Ground.
"What?" I ask her fully aware she won't answer me – were not even sure she can but I still ask "Do u have any complains Monster?" does it come with a sneering tone the Monster just looks up at me with those sunken in eyes and rage fills me like so often as I take a swing and my hand lands firmly on here cheek leaving a red mark this time no grunt is heard no reaction she looks at the ground, satisfaction fills me when I see that "Thats right u have nothing to complain about..".
The other two just watch me with a smile nether of them seams to think this is something out of the ordinarily, after that we take the old buckets with us and leaving the one with water and food by the door and leave again the door slams shut and all three of us forget about her for the rest of the day.
Girl
They leave and I slowly move around the hole in the middle of the room to get to the buckets my food is... nothing a Human should eat, I saw that the old Dog outside eats the same as me .. he just gets more – its really unfair that he gets more and he has only one chain to hold him and he is allowed to play with the other Children I take a sip of my water I have to be careful I need it to drink and to wash so I cant be wasteful once it fell over by accident and I had to go the full day and night without water.
I pull the buckets with care one at the time to my corner - my corner is my favourite place in my shack, at least that is what I think its called 'Mouse' called it like that once so I've been going with this name for my place, shack and in this shack are a lot of holes no big ones of course they would come and put new wood over big ones every time I already knew that so I tried not to make holes bigger – my current hole has been here for a while and its perfect I can see a lot a few tree's green grass parts of the house right next to my shack and Berry.. the dog. Berry was a big dog with giant ears he looks different form the children that play with him outside when the weather is good, I wonder do I also look like this? How does my face look like why do they call me Monster every time they come – why do they not treat me like the other people outside when I see them they are nice and laugh a lot, I would like that but the only laughs I get are bad ones, I wonder what I have done.
I Shake my head when I think to deep about it an empty feeling comes and all the questions and the building sadness gets sweeped away I don't feel anything I don't want to feel anything so I look at the raindrops falling down form the sky.
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