Komatsu.

CH 1

The boredom took over there minds as all three walked aimlessly down the sidewalk of their city. The pink-haired girl looked up, her eyes meeting with the dark clouds high above her. She knew what was coming; a storm. She didn't know what type; it could be heavy rain, or light rain. It could be thunder and lightening. It could be strong winds or hail. But obviously, she could tell there was going to be a storm that will soon creep over and fill up the sky, so she made up an excuse so she and her friends can go inside any building near them, and shield them selves for what was soon to happen.

"Guys, I'm really hungry." She didn't lie. It was just more excuse then truth. Although she was hungry, it was only mild. She figured they might as well eat now. "Anyone else?"

"I am," Said the boy to the left of her, his blonde hair spiked up with gel that stayed still in the wind. "I sure could go for a burger and fries. Sasuke?"

"Sure." The boy — who'd been called Sasuke — agreed with his friends, and led the way to McDonalds, which was only a five minute walk to reach there destination.

"Three cheese burgers, three medium french-fries and three cokes, please." Once they entered the fast-food joint, they where all pleased to see there was few people in the building. All three walked eagerly to the counter and Sasuke quickly stated there order to the lady standing before the cashier.

She dressed in a red and yellow shirt. In yellow, the letter "M" was stitched above her left breast. She had her hair up in a pony tail, a few strands by the side of her dark face. Acne spread all over her face in large patches. She didn't look pleasant at all. She quickly sored the blonde boys blue eyes.

"Uhh … Sorry, but I forgot my money!" The blue eyed boy said, once Sasuke looked at him.

"Yeah, same here." The pink haired girl looked down at her feet, feeling guilty.

Sasuke glared at the boy, "Thanks a lot, Naruto." Then to the girl, "and you to, Sakura. You both owe me some money, and don't forget it."

He handed his bank card to the unpleasant lady, and she handed him the card swiper after she swiped his card and dropped it on the counter Quickly, he pressed four different digits that was his password, then pressed the "Okay" button with his index finger, then picked up his card and stuffed it in his pocket. Minutes after doing so, there order appeared on the counter on three different trays.

The three friends — now identified as Sakura, Sasuke and Naruto — walked with the trays held up by both their hands by there waists. Sakura led the way to a clean empty table by the window. She sat in front of Naruto and Sasuke. They stuffed french-fries into there mouths, took huge bites out of the burger and long loud sips of there coke, while laughing and talking about whatever they can think of. Sakura's eyes wandered out the window, to see that it had begun spitting lightly. Not sure if it could get worst, she warned her friends.

"We're going to have to hurry up and run back home before the rain gets worse." She cautioned.

Naruto nodded with a mouthful of fries grinning, revealing some of the munched up fries. Sakura rolled her eyes in annoyingness.

Minutes after finishing there food and cleaning them selves up at the washrooms, the rain began falling down on the earth in buckets. Everything was wet. Sakura sighed.

"Great … Why did you have to take so long eating, Naruto?" And with that, she hit the back of Narutos' head with a fist.

"Ouch!" Naruto rubbed his head with his left arm. "Sorry." He replied in an annoyed tone.

All three walked back to there previous table and stared out the window.

"It doesn't look like it's ever going to stop." Sasuke said.

Naruto didn't mind the rain. He would have gladly walked into the rain, all the way back home and get yelled at about being in his soaking clothing from his mother, then get a lecture about getting sick from them.

"I don't wanna walk in the rain!" Sakura complained, after they all seated themselves back into there chairs on the table, after throwing out what was left of there meals and putting the trays away.

"Well, I could give my sister and her two friends a ride." The voice came from behind Sakura.

She quickly turned around, to find the source of the familiar voice. As she turned her neck, and Naruto and Sasuke rose there heads, Sakura's eyes widened and a huge grinned fell upon her lips.

"Komatsu! Komatsu!" Sakura leaped out of her seat and wrapped her arms around the girl in front of her.

"Nice teh' see ya' to," The older girl — now identified as Komatsu, Sakura's older sister — spoke softly and slowly as she wrapped her own arms around the younger girl loosely.

After a short hug, Sakura said, "Komatsu, I want you to meet my friends. Sasuke," Sakura pointed at the boy with the dark hair, spiked from the back, "And Naruto." then to the blue eyed blonde.

Naruto just stared, speechlessly at Komatsu, his jaw hitting nearly hitting the table. His eyes glued to Komatsu, and what she sported that day. Her black shirt, cut by scissors, showed off her belly button ring and nice abs. Komatsu's short black jean skirt ended a little bit higher then mid-thigh. Her long legs where covered by black fishnet, and she wore black leather boots, looking brand new and shining. Narutos eyes wandered back up to her face. One ear had three skull piercings. Her large forehead, like Sakura's, was covered by a long fringe that covered up her left eye. And one, small, black stud was neatly placed in the middle of her bottom lip, that shined from too much lip gloss. His eyes once again, wondered down her neck, and back at her breasts. His eyes glued there, staring at her nipples that could easily be seen threw her tiny shirt. Naruto could feel a small lump form in his pants, and he blushed.

"It's nice to meet you." Sasuke said, almost automatically.

Naruto just smiled up at her awkwardly and said quickly and softly said, "'Nice to meet you, I'm Naruto."

"Yes Naruto, I just told her who you are." Sakura crossed her arms and rolled her eyes, and blew a lock of pink hair out of her face.

"Okay, c'mon guys, let's go." Sakura said, turning around and heading out of the building. Sasuke, Naruto and Komatsu were quick to follow.

Once the four were out of the building, Komatsu pulled out keys from her jean pocket and walked towards her blue car. Her hair soaked and glued to her head and face, and her mascara and eye shadow ran down her face, but she didn't care.

"Alright everyone, we're we goin'?" Komatsu asked, after they all entered her car; Sakura in front, and Naruto and Sasuke in the back.

"We're heading to Narutos place." Sasuke said casually, running his fingers threw his soaked black hair.

Komatsu pulled out of her parking spot as she spoke softly, "Okay, someone mind' tellin' me where that is?"

Moments after Komatsu entered the main road and drove in the pouring rain, Sakura said, "Naruto…Aren't you going to tell her?"

"Oh, heh, oh yeah." Naruto scratched the back of his head and blushed, "It's on the next left turn and the house number is 5454."

Minutes passed after Naruto gave her the directions, with no one speaking at all. Then Sakuras eyes wandered down at the cup holders. There was an empty beer can crunched up in the cup holder. Sakura picked it up with a concerned look in her aqua eyes.

"Komatsu…Have you been drinking and driving?" Her eyes then widened slowly and her voice became more panicky, "Are you DRUNK?!"

"What? No!" Komatsu laughed at Sakuras' overreaction as she stopped the car at a red light. "That's not mine. That's my friends…I've been sober for a month, Sakura, I swear." Once the red light turned green, she turned the wheel to the left and pressed on the gas, entering a street full of houses and cars and kids playing on the sidewalk. The house number, 5454, was easily found, as it was the first house on the right. She parked the car as Sakura swung open the door. She jumped out, along with Sasuke and Naruto. She waved goodbye to Komatsu as she drove off, and entered the house with her two friends.


Heyhey...I'm re-writing this story I wrote when I was younger, about a year ago. I ditched it and then this year I came across it again and was a little dissapointed at my writing skills...Hopefully I am improoving...Hopefully I'll stick with this version 'till the end. 3 Review, bitchz, you know you wannna. ;)

SloanxSweety, or as some might know me as, Moony Loony. 33