An Unwanted Visit
Chapter 1: That unforgetful face
Just add 2 years to everyones original age :D
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Carol belongs to me, and she's Amy's sister :D Carol's 17 in here
"So much make up.. Why would Rouge give me all these?" mumbled Amy Rose. She was sitting on a stool, looking right at her mirror vanity while applying lip gloss on. "Then again... It's very cute..." Amy said, smiling. She was just about to add some blush when the doorbell was ringing. Amy got up and ran down the stairs, careful not to trip. She opened the door after the doorbell ringed repeatedly, and was ready to greet the person. "Hello! So what can I-" Amy stopped, and looked in horror at the female who stood in front of her. "I-It's you!" She said, shocked. "What? Is that how you greet your relatives?" the female said, with a smirk. "Now move aside!" she shouted, and shoved past Amy. She fell back, with a groan. "Carol..." Amy whispered, glaring. "Carol" had a few similarities to Amy, only.. She looked older. Carol had short, dark red hair, jade green eyes, peach skin, and a bang that would stick out in front of her face. She wore a mauve colored dress , boots, and gloves. And also had navy bandanas wrapped around her head, bang, dress, gloves, and boots.
Carol walked up to Amy's room, looking around. 'Ugh, lame. She still hasn't changed her design' She thought. Suddenly, Carol noticed a little table with flower in a pot, a bracelet, note, and picture of the blue hedgehog, Sonic with a frame. Her curiosity got the best of her, and she ran up to it, holding the , picture. Amy was standing in the doorway, watching. "He's perfect! And adorable too!" Carol turned to look at Amy. "I see you got the hots for this guy" she told her with a smirk. "Too bad you won't have him, because he's going to be mine" Carol said, giggling. "Don't you even DARE!" Amy shouted, summoning her piko piko hammer. "Lay a hand on him, and you'll be smashed FLAT!" she growled, getting in fighting position. Carol rolled her eyes, and threw the picture to the wall, almost hitting Amy. The glass shattered as it made pact with wall. "Oh no..." Amy whispered, staring at the broken glass, and torned picture. She let her guard down as Carol kicked her against the cheek, causing a very nasty bruise. Amy fell on her knees, growling. 'Why you...' she said to herself, glaring at her older sibling. "Well, I must be going. But first.." Carol grinned, and picked up the flower, and crushed it. Draining it. Amy looked up in horror. "B-but..." a single tear spilled from her eye. 'That flower is so precious to me! The very first flower Sonic ever gave to me...' Any thought to herself. Carol walked out the house, laughing at her little sister's humiliation.
Well? What do you think? Yeah, it needs work.. I tried to write it as soon as possible.
Carol is so mean :( reminds me of me since my sister hates me toooooo
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