Hey guys!

ok so this is my newest and first ever story on . i was really disappointed at the ending to Allegiant (if you haven't read the trilogy, DO YOU LIVE UNDER A ROCK OR WHAT?!;P) so i decided i would write a sequel to it. hope you guys enjoy and lets see if someone cares: please leave reviews (no nasty stuff) as any improvements will be highly appreciated.

also, i made my account on a leap year(YAYY!) but fanfic wouldn't let me post until 12 hours later, so as much as i would've loved to publish it on a leap year, it was quite impossible.

sorry the first chapter might be a bit short but nevertheless, on with the story...(i will be bringing out new chapters every once in a while, already got ten chapter written and and ready to be published!) and btw they will be in different povs to see both sides...

So in this sequel, tris was shot and she is now in a coma, unfortunately something is wrong...Enjoy!:)

D.D XXX

(soz about the stupid name, couldn't think of a better one lol :p)

Disclaimer: as much as i would love to, I DO NOT own divergent or any of the characters, all rights go to veronica roth, the amazing creator of these amazing books!(and movies)

chapter one

Tris

Exclusion.

That's what I'm in right now. I live in the darkness that surrounds me without any sign of the others. If I pay careful attention I can hear the talking to me; they're always by my side.

Especially him.

He would sit nights on end next to me and inform me on how different the world is now that the war is over. I guess for now it is. Sometimes I can feel the tickling of his warm breath when he whispers 'I love you'.

The problem was: I didn't know who he was; who I was. I didn't know why I had been stuck in this darkness for so long, let alone why. I wish I had something that could help me remember.

I wish.

The other day the doctors told him that he needs to make the decision as to keep me breathing or switch off the machine.

Machine? I was kept alive by a machine? This didn't make sense. I was...dead?

But of course. It made perfect sense. Somewhere deep down I knew it.

My thoughts whirled around my head like children on a carrousel. Or a...ferris wheel: tall and majestic, but enough to make you dizzy.

I pressed my hands to my face, feeling their warm temperature beginning to melt away my body.

I needed help.

I needed to remember.

I needed to live.

But how? When my body feels so fragile, as if it is just going to snap in half and slowly sink away, never to be seen again. Just like the titanic: the two beautiful young teenagers falling in love until death did them part.

"Just like you Beatrice."

What?

I sat up in an instant and looked around me. I was the pray and the darkness was my predator, ready to tear me apart at any moment, just like my thoughts were.

"Beatrice."

Was that me speaking? No. It couldn't be; i couldn't even open my mouth at how stunned i was. But was that my name?

"Hell yeah it is! Or do you prefer Tris?"

My head snapped forward, following the direction of the sound. In front of me, a dark skinned man, maybe seventeen or eighteen, around my age I guess, was approaching me, a smile planted on his face. It looked too genuine to be a joke.

That face: I could recognise that face anywhere. But I couldn't gather my thoughts and decided I should speak up, I had to be confident.

As the person was approaching I felt my nerves lowering. We were face to face before he extended his hand to help me up, and I gladly took it. It felt secure, just like when I was going down the zip line.

Wait. What!?

My brain was two steps ahead of me, remembering all the details before I could process and think them through first.

The hands that strapped me in and pushed me down through the open air, it felt like I was flying.

I got up to my feet, his giddy smile forcing me to smile myself. I squinted at him, something coming back to me, before they went wide with shock.

Uriah.

BOOM! So there we have it, my very first chapter. it was a bit short but it looked soooo looong on my phone(blame apple for making tiny phones;))

if i have a couple of reviews by half past seven TODAY then i will post chapter two also TODAY... you lucky people!

love you,

D.D xxx