Hey! this is the first fanfic i have ever written and i would really appreciate some constructive criticism?

For the sake of this story, there was no A, Cece was simply one of Alison's best friends. i genuinly have some really good ideas for this story and would love to share them.

here it goes...

"God this hotel is gorgeous!" the tall brunette exclaimed as she looked all around taking in her surroundings. Aria, Emily and Hanna are currently stood in the lobby of the Santa Parlour Hotel just on the edge of the coast. They had always wanted to spend Spring Break in Florida. They had now officially started their Spring Break and the three girls couldn't be any more excited.

After Emily, Hanna and Aria gathered their key cards and their belongings, they made their way to the elevator to get into their hotel rooms for the next few weeks. Emily was in a world of her own, thinking about the loud music, drinking games, parties on the beach, girls in bikinis… The hot drunk college girls sparked a little flame in Emily as she planned all the ways to defile girls on the beach- A fantasy she was going to conquer this trip. Emily felt a pull within her thighs as she thought about all the fun she was going to have.

Emily's internal monologue spoke to her, telling her to grab her key card, run to her room, get into her bikini and get so drunk she would forget her own name. However, she, Hanna and Aria had agreed to get into their rooms unpack and catch up on their sleep as they had been awake for at least 24 hours and they wanted to be fully refreshed for the first night of Spring Break!

"Han, Aria, I'm just gonna head to the bathroom, you know how I can't pee on a plane" Emily says whilst walking away from the pair.

"We will meet you up there Em" Aria replies.

Walking out of the bathroom, Paige briefly came and flooded her mind as she realised one of their songs was playing in the lobby. Paige left to go to UCLA and never looked back… Not that Emily could blame her now, she remembers when she used to dream about getting Away from Rosewood and starting a fresh slate at college. That's exactly what she did. When Paige broke up with her, the sweet sensitive Emily changed. when she started college, she gained a small reputation of being a "player" as time progressed the reputation became bigger and bigger as it got to the point where even straight girls were even falling into the hands of Emily for the night. Hanna and Aria were the ones who put the pieces of Emily's heart back together along with many drunken one night stands. It was fair to say that the swimmer was quite proud of her reputation, she knew that nobody could resist her charm and cocky confidence. As the song begins to frustrate her, she finally moves on her way to the elevator, picking up her speed.

Suddenly out of nowhere, she is snapped back to reality when another body slams into her as she realises she blatantly walked into someone. Embarrassed she looks up at the poor woman, "good god I'm sorry I didn't see you there, are you okay?" the swimmer says as she bends to help the poor blonde.

*** 10 minutes earlier***

She wasn't really listening to Cece and Spencer as she was taking in her first impression of her home for the next 2 weeks.

Alison stands in the middle of the hotel lobby taking in the exquisite view before her. She had just checked into her luxury hotel, shining white marble floors with golden features and a giant golden chandelier dangling in the centre of the ceiling. Alison was amazed.

The trio wanted to stay longer in Florida but the three decided that 2 weeks would be enough as they wanted to go back and visit their loved ones. Now Alison was here, she never wanted to leave.

She wasn't surprised that Spencer and Cece totally abandoned her in the lobby, the whole taxi ride was the two exclaiming that they wanted to get straight in their rooms, dump the luggage, get into their best swimsuit and head straight out to the beach and kick off their Spring Break.

Realising she had been left, Alison slowly strolls toward the elevator and presses the button to summon the lift. Out of nowhere she feels a clash of someone else bump into her. After regaining her balance, anger was quickly building up within her. Taking her anger out on the girl she bumped into. "god watch where you are going you moron" she barked. "good god I'm so sorry I was daydreaming are you okay?" the other girl replies with not minding the fact she had just been insulted. Alison instantly goes for her bag which is now on the ground, not hearing the brunette as her frustration begins to leave her and embarrassment fills her quickly. The lack of co-ordination startles the two as they both bend down to pick up the blonde's bag when they knock heads.

"OUCH! Sorry again!" the blonde hears her this time and she looks up to match the soft voice to a face and when she does she, suddenly doesn't care about the small incident. As soon as she makes eye contact, Emily feels something deep in her stomach. "oh my fucking god" the brunette thinks. Emily can't help but curse as she sees the blonde for the first time and her previous pull between her legs comes back 10 times harsher. Just looking at this girl was fun all in itself but Emily doesn't do anything to stop the inappropriate thoughts now rushing through her mind as she analyses each detail about the blonde's face. From the freckles across the bridge of her nose to her heart-shaped lips.

"Its fine don't worry about it" Alison replied sympathetically. "Are you sure you're okay? Emily asked with a smirk and a high octave at the end insinuating to get a name out of the stunning girl she just walked into. "Alison and yeah like I said I'm fine" Alison replies to Emily's question with a very small smile. Still smirking, "Emily, Emily Fields" is all Emily says with a wink as the flirtation begins to unleash. With that, the brunette keeps her eyes glued to Alison's as the "ding" of the lift gathers Emily's attention form the blonde beauty stealing her last final glance before they are separated.

Its then that Alison realises that this Emily Fields had took the lift before her very eyes and she didn't even realise until it reopened, empty.

Wasn't the longest of chapter but i felt like it would be best to end it there.

Till next time...:)