This is my first story. Please. Please. Please review so that I can improve. Sorry there is no actual sonic stuff in it but I promise the next chapter will it is just to get the story in a good setup first.
It is set before the sonic adventure games but my OC is from this world so he knows what will happen.
This story is really to get my head around writing because I am going to do a better one after this one. It won't feature to much actual Sonic adventure stuff because it will be mostly about my OC and a few other Sonic characters.
And if anyone wants there OC in here please leave a review and their OC and a description of their character and personality and how they look like. I will choose the most appropriate one for my story.
REALLY IMPORTANT!
DISCLAIMER: If it is not obvious Sonic and any characters are owned by SEGA and Star Wars is owned by Disney I think and Pokémon is owned by Game Freak. Jack Stringer is my own creation and the story also.
I have always wanted to live in Sonic's world or Mobius whatever you want to call it. My name is Jack Stringer and I am 16 years old. I live on cattle station on the East Coast. People always think that the Australian cattle stations are in the middle of nowhere which is wrong because I live in one. Another Interesting fact is my French heritage and as such I am, with my dad, an expert crossbow handler. I now have perfected the art of crossbow making and no I have made 6 round pump action crossbow with a range of a hundred meters. Needless to say crossbows are illegal in Australia and we don't show them are crossbows. At the moment I am going to the hill paddock to move the cattle to the lower paddock. Since Dad is a firm believer in tradition we use horses instead of motorbikes.
I made my way to the group of cattle and I started moving my horse behind them. Since us 'Frenchies' don't really like dogs we have to manage with out them.
CRACK… BOOM
Great! It started thundering.
I quickly rode back to the stable and dismounted and cleaned my horse. I went inside our house and I found a note saying 'We are in town and we might not be home in till midnight.'
I can't believe it I get 15 hours all to myself. Yessss!
By now the thundering had stopped and started my laptop up and I started watching cut scenes from sonic generations. I own a Wii so I can't play generations. Sonic has always been my favourite game but I also want sonic adventure 2 battle but it cost way too much.
1 hour later…
After finishing the cut scenes I went outside to start practicing with my slingshot. Not one of those elastic ones but the hard core leather ones. I have already mastered the crossbow and now I am aiming to master the slingshot. When I threw my four stones I went to the creek to get some more rocks. When I arrived I saw this peculiar stone. It was perfectly round and white but it was definitely a rock.
All of a sudden a purple swirl of smoke came out the rock and started turning on the spot. Unexplainably I got attracted to the centre and I slowly dissipated into the mist.
In this mist form I found myself in the white chamber with three purple swirls and another behind. The one behind me was probably was the one I went through. As I started to turn around to go back I saw some signs on top of the portals which is what I thought they were. On the left portal was sign saying Star Wars, the middle one was Sonic the Hedgehog and the right portal said Pokémon
I felt strangely attracted to the Star Wars one. I didn't know why but I went through it. I found myself on top of some big grey and noisy generator of sorts.
As I got myself down and I saw some people walk past. I then realized that they were the characters from Star Wars I the phantom menace! There was Padme with her purple robe and the two Jedi I was sure to be Ob Wan Kenobi and the other one I couldn't remember. I quickly hid behind myself behind the generator.
(Third person view)
Suddenly a shadowy figure appeared in front of a huge door. Jack realized that he was at the end of the phantom menace episode and the figure was Darth Maul and so he snuck up to N-1 star fighter and waited. Soon enough as he expected the Jedi followed the shadowy figure and the others dispersed to the star fighters.
(Jack's view)
I saw the little boy that I deduced was Anakin Skywalker appeared beside the one I was hiding by and he climbed in. I knew he needed my help in this situation so I climbed in. He didn't seem to notice me so I was surprised. But then I glanced down at myself and what I found was a shock. I had turned invisible but I knew I could talk.
(Anakin's view)
I felt something brush me but I didn't see what did it. I then heard a voice of a teenager. The voice whispered "Don't freak out, stay quiet, I won't hurt you" "huh?" "I will help you" It then went silent. "Who are you?" It responded "That is not for you to know except that you could say I am a good guy".
(Jack's view)
I knew he was naïve so he settled with that. I then saw the canopy closing and I warned "it's closing; the star fighter is getting ready." "What do you mean?" he asked. Suddenly some droidekas rolled up to Padme and the like. "We must help them" He exclaimed "fine let me do the controls but you don't need to move because I can do it myself" "huhh…okay". I grabbed the joystick and it felt just like the one back home when I play Star Wars Squadron Leader. It all came back to me. I knew what I was doing.
I started up the fighter and pressed the left side button. The lasers shot out and hit the droidekas dead on. "Cool!" Anakin exclaimed. Padme gave Anakin a shocked and thankful face" "Not done yet" I said as we followed the rest of the N-1 Star Fighters "Where are we going? Because my master said to stay quite." he sounded worried. "Don't worry I know what I am doing."
As we got closer to the control ship I started seeing all the fighters. I knew what to do. I decided to have a little fun. I started blasting robot fighters right and left. I scored 10 kills in just 5 minutes…well I am that good… I then started going down into the hangar. "Uhh… do you think this is a good idea?" "Positive". I swerved left then right and blasted a few things on the way and finally got to where I wanted to go the reactors. I shot my four torpedoes and swerved right fast and started racing back through the hangar as I heard explosions. "Woppee!" Anakin exclaimed. I then started for the Naboo hangar. As we touched down I started thinking. "Anakin quickly get out!" "Why…" "Do it!" as I opened the canopy and forced Anakin out "Bye Anakin, be good!" and then I started for the portal near the top of the hangar and shot through it. I didn't want any questions asked about me.
Tumbled through the white room and I found a scaled down version of an N-1 in my hand. TOTALY COOL. I then started for my home portal and came back to where I was. It said 12 o'clock midday. I guess that time goes the same way in each portal world and now I have something to do.
What do you guys think? Please any review please and even bad ones so to give me feedback.
As I said there will be sonic stuff in the next chapter. Hope you had a nice read. Please review to tell me if this story is okay or not and if I should continue.
