A Fathers Love part one
By:
NekoNoir
Ok lets get one thing straight this is out of my eliments I'm used to doing NC-17 so pleas try to watch out there MABEY some signs of that in the story but very little this is mature stuff only because of Langue and some scencs contain mature content also the characters of Naruto belong to Masashi Kishimoto the only character belonging to Me is Hatake Jaze the paring in this will be Itachi-Jaze if none of you like that then too bad some of these events of this stroy are ture and I have used my real life experiences for it so pleas have fun reading my story thank you
"..."
is when someone is speaking
... when someone is thinking or
doing something
also quick note...these chapeters are very
short
Hatake
sat ther the wind pounded against the window she noted at how the
rain softly called her name and whispered She ler the rain call and
beckon her. The thunder seemed to clashe louldly as the lightning
struck Konoha oh how she wanted to dance with it all. Takeing it in
with her green eyes started out into the black abyss."Oh why
cant I be like the rain and the wind?" she questiond aloud to
no one in particular Jaze being born an only childe felt lonley as
most would at times but she was not at all like everyone els she was
not polite or kind she was rude and she enjoyd what most did not. the
most on her mind was killing and blood thats what got her attention .
Polietness wasn't in her nature not after her mother died she was
always left feeling abandoned her father was barely ever home so she
was left to fend for herself and didn't really on others that
much.So ok that was the first chapter
i know short thats why i made it so big to make it look
longer the next chapter will be a bit bigger i promise but pleas
don't hesitat to send feedback i love hearign from people also sorry
about some of the spelling mistakes i am wrighting with one hand due
to a very bad burn
she studied hard in the Japanses langueg hopeing that her
father would congradulat her...only to come to notice
that well...no one was around to congradulate her . On
the rare ocasion father would send boysover to "check" upon
her though most of them would try to watch her take a shower or try
to catch her as she came outa the bath with only a towle on
...this discusted her yet this made her smirk boys would give
anything to lay a hand on her and even girls would fall to her
begging her to let them touch her . She was a desired girl yet she
didn't care the only thing she ever yearned for was so close
...yet so far away at the same time and that one thing
was a Fathers love