Ok so this is a treatment I wrote for my tv production class. I got a 20 out of 25 on it so I guess its good. i've only wrote this chapter for the treatment. I have to edit it some because on the original it name the shots and im pretty sure you don't know what any of them are so i've edited them out.
It's a show a teenage basketball star. It's of course a troyella.
The Show starts off with a view of the empty East High Wild Cats gym. The heavy gym doors open up and a boy (Troy) walks in with a basketball in tow. As he practices the heavy doors once again open up, but this time a girl (Gabriella) walks in screaming at him. He turns to look at her, she start accusing him of cheating on her. He of course immediately denies it. She slaps him hard across the cheek, he grabs his red throbbing cheek in pain.
After he recovers he throws his basketball on the shiny gym floor in anger, he starts screaming at her and calling her mean and hurtful names. She runs out os the gym crying evan harder. He walks into the locker room to change into his regular cloths before school starts. He walks out of the locker room and starts to walk down the hallway to his locker to get his books and such for his first period class. As he's walking people say hi and congratulate him on the game he won the previous night. Suddenly a blonde big chested girl pops up in front of him. She starts to talk about how much fun she had the night before. Then it all comes back to him. Last night at the after party his friends convinced him to get drunk, then the blonde big chested girl (Sharpay) started flirting with him, him of course being drunk flirted back totally forgetting about Gabriella. After awhile of flirting they started making out, Sharpay then coaxed him upstairs. He starts running down the hallway where he knew Gabriella would be. In the Science Lab. The scene fades to the science lab. Where we see Gabriella writing in her diary about how much she hates that Troy is popular and a basketball star. Troy then bursts into the science lab runs up to her and starts kissing her as he pulls away he starts apologizing to her explaining that he was drunk and it didn't mean anything telling her the whole story. She opens her mouth to reply
-TO BE CONTINUED-
ok so sorry its short that all i had time to write in class. how was it? Rate it on a scale 1 to 10. 10 being the best 1 being the lowest. K thanks .