Hi ,this is my first fanfiction so I need help. I was wondering if you guys could be kind enough to listen to the first chapter and see if it's a good enough story to continue or should I make another one :) Review please 3
This isn't right!
Chapter 1-Double Date.
As the bell went,the whole class started filling out the classroom like a pack of zebras.
The door closed and the only person left was Ezra Fitz,the hot,new,English teacher.
As he did the grading,there was a soft knock on the door.
'Come in!' He said as the door opened and a small,skinny,brunette came in.
'Hi ,can I talk to you?' Aria Montgomery asked as she walked slowly and sexily towards him.
'Sure!' He smiled as he watched her come closer,biting his lip,admiring her.
'Are you free tonight?' She looked at him smiling sexily whilst biting her lip.
'I was ,but im not now.' He said ,smirking a bit as he looked up and down his students body.
'Oh okay.' She said in a dissapointed voice as she spun around and walked away letting her head hang down.
'I'll see you at 7!' Ezra smiled as she opened the door.
'Okay' Aria smiled and winked as she walked out the classroom into the noisy hallway.
A second later,the other door opened and Emily Fields walked in.
'Hey sweetie,I got you your coffee.' She smiled as she walked towards him,holding two cups of starbucks coffee.
'Hey babe,thanks,your a life saver' He got up and gave her a kiss as he took the coffee.
'So ,what are you doing tonight?' She asked him as she sat on Ezra's desk,with her legs one on the other.
'I'm staying in school until 4 and then I have dinner with my parents.'He said as he sipped his coffee.
'Oh okay ,well ,do you want to do something tomorrow?' She asked with a sad puppy face.
'Of course'He smiled and kissed her passionately.
'I have to head to practice,I'll see you tomorrow sweetie.' She smiled as she took the last sip of her coffee and threw it into the bin.
'Okay babe,Bye.' He called after her as she jumped off the desk and walked out the classroom,blowing him a kiss on the way out.
He sipped his coffee and stared at the door for a moment thinking about what just happened.
This is going on for too long,he thought to himself.
The bell went,making him jump in his chair,as the students started to file into the room ,he starts writing on the board.
'This isn't right!' He muttered under his breath.