A/N: I was asked by my friend, Snowcrystal of Thunderclan, to write a review of my brother's story. Here it is! I hope you all enjoy!:-:
It all started a long, long, long, long time ago... (What all started a long, long, long, long, time ago?)
I went to this house. (Where is "this house"? Is it in FLORIDA!?)
Two ninjas were in it. The ninjas ate a banana, and then their stomach felt terrible. The banana blasted out, and ate the two ninjas. The ninjas died. (O.O)
And then the house had a bomb, and it blew up the banana. (So there wasn't a bomb earlier?)
And then a apple was eaten. When the apple was eaten, it blew up the three ninjas. (WHAT THREE NINJAS!?
There were three hundred ninjas who ate three hundred bananas. (That's a lot of bananas!)
And then there was this weird rock. The rock fell. One hundred fifty ninjas were killed by the rock. BOOM! (Who keeps creating these random objects?)
And the house went KNOCK! KNOCK! And then a thousand ninjas blew up the house. BOOM! BOOM! BOOM! BOOM! BOOM! (One BOOM!: Fine. Two BOOM!s: I've seen worse. Three BOOM!s: Barely passing. Four BOOM!s: No, just no. Five BOOM!s: ARGHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!)
THE END (Wow!!!! The end of what, exactly? #clueless)