The Day She Sank
A/N Hey, This is my first ever fanfiction so no hate please. Well this story is about The Titanic and if Jack had would change in Rose's Life and who would they meet along the way? That's what inspired me to write this story, Ill try to update once a week maybe twice but ill start slow and gradually update more.
Disclaimer: I don't own The Titanic Movie or any other company mentioned. All characters Belong to James Cameron.
On With The Story!
Jacks P.O.V(While Trapped Down In Third Class-during the sinking)
There was no use. They wouldn't unlock the gates. In desperation I called over Fabrizio and Tommy, Picking Up the wooden bench that was attached to the wall and floor. IN the corner of my eye I could see Rose moving people out of the way as we counted.
"1"
"2"
"3"We charged towards the gate watching it crash at our feet.I ran to get Rose while people rushed over the fallen gate. When I got to Rose I saw her talking to Bill Cartmell,
"please! Take Cora you have more chance of surviving than me! Please shes just a child!" Bill Pleaded. I looked at Rose, She looked at me. We nodded and I picked up the little girl I had befriended when I boarded the me and Rose ran up to the Main deck we realised all the life boats had been lowered. I knew I had to find a way to make sure we all survived. No! I had to make sure Cora and Rose survived even if that meant dying for them.
Rose's P.O.V
Jack grabbed my hand while holding up cora in his other ran towards the back of the ship.
"were gonno have to wait here. When I count to three I want both of you to take a deep breath just as we go under. Your gonno need to kick, kick to the surface and don't stop." Only as he said this did I realise we had a five year old girl to look after. From now on her safety is more important than myn.
Snapping out of my day dream Jack began counting.I could see Cora gripping even tighter onto Jacks arms as he got to One we had all Taken the deepest breaths possible and began swimming towards the surface.
Gone. I couldn't see jack anywhere, I figured Cora was with jack still. So she was surely safe but where was jack? I felt someone grab me and pull me away from the screaming circle of people surroding the sinking place of finally reached a piece of wood and two deck chairs. Jack had some how by now managed to tie the chairs toghter with the piece of wood connected placed cora on the small door and helped me up onto the floating Deck he sat down himself we started talking between ourselfs, waiting , hoping for the boats to come back.
Cora's P.O.V
I sat on the wooden piece of door that uncle Jack had placed me on. I cried. I cried for daddy I cried for all the daddys on the ship that had fallen into this sea.I wanted daddy so much.I turned and faced uncle Jack "Wheres my daddy?" I whispered, you could here the coldness in my voice.
" I don't know Cora" He croaked out, " but if we don't find your daddy, I promise me and Rose , here ,, will look after you till you are a big girl, I Promise" After that speech I finally settled down and feel asleep.
A/N HEY GUYS! THANKS SO MUCH FOR READING THIS I WILL TRY TO IMPROVE MY WRITING STYLE AND I WILL TRY TO UPDATE SOON. IF YOU HAVE ANY IDEAS ON HOW TO IMPROVE THIS REVIEW AND PRIVATE MESSAGE ME. I WILL BE KEEPING TRACK OF PEOPLE WHO STAY TIL THE END OF THIS STORY. I KNOW IT ISNT MUCH BUT IT'S THE BEST I CAN DO.I DON'T HAVE AN EDITER OR A PROOF READER SO IM SORRY FOR ANY MISTAKES. PLEASE REVIEW IF YOU HAVE ANY IDEAS ON HOW TO IMPROVE THIS AND TELL ME WHETER I SHOULD CONTINUE OR NOT, THANKS FOR READING
-MADII13