Chapter 1
One day, Ash and friends were on their way to the next town and were, once again, lost.
"Are we there yet?" asked May. "I can't wait to get to the next contest."
"Um, yeah, just need to figure out how to get there..." said Brock.
"Don't tell me we're lost!"
"No, we're just... taking the scenic route."
"So, we're lost."
"Pika pi" said Pikachu.
"You said it buddy" said Ash.
"Guys, stop arguing. The town should be right over that hill" Max said.
"Hooray! said May as she took off.
"Pi?"said Pikachu suddenly perking up.
Suddenly, Pikachu darted off of Ash's shoulder, into the nearby woods. Ash ran after him, followed by Max, May and Brock. Ash found Pikachu at a strange shrine made of stone. Ash started to reach for a glowing stone, when a Pidgeotto jumped(flew?) out and spoke in its own language.
"Pidgey pidge pidgeotto!" it cried out urgently.
Pikachu, understanding what it said, tried to stop ash from touching the stone, but they both ended up touching it. They were both enveloped in a light like that of an evolving Pokemon. Pikachu's arms and legs got longer as his tail receded into his body. His fur disappeared and his face became that of a human. Ash, on the other hand, was shrinking as fur sprouted all over his body. He grew a mane and tail, and his face became that of an Eevee. When the light cleared, a blonde haired kid wearing Ash's clothes and an Eevee in a hat were lying on the ground, motionless.
This is the first chapter of my first story, so review and tell me what you think. I need a human name for Pikachu. I'm excepting OC's, so leave a species, name, and anything I should know about them in a review. I'll try to use as many OC's as possible.
All 'bout Espeon