Okay um this is my first fan fiction ever and reviews and help is really needed i know it short so in new chapters i will make then longer. Anyone want to be my editior please tell me

Disclaimer: I DO NOT OWN BLEACH I ONLY OWN MY LIFE AND KIMBERLY ELIZABETH WHO WILL BE MENTION IN THE STORY LATER!!!!

I woke up stiff from sleeping for so long. I yawned and stretched, letting my long hair covers my eyes. Bed hair. I tried to remember what time, day, heck, even what year it was, because I don t know how long I have been asleep. First, though, I was thirsty. No, hungry is more like it, and not for blood, human food. It feels like I was sleeping for a long time, but it was only one day. I got up quietly, making sure not to wake up my brother, who was in the room next to mine. I opened my door and tip-toed to the kitchen to get something to eat.

I finally got to the kitchen and looked at the time. 6:00 am. Perfect. As I got my bowl of cereal, I wondered what woke me up in the first place.

I tried to look back on my dream. I vaguely remember a guy, me and my brother, and that he was mad. I finished and put my bowl in the dishwasher. It was now 6:30. I went back up stairs and woke my brother up for school. We were twins and I hated it. I walked back to my room and put on my school uniform.
"Momo!" I heard my brother yelling my name. "We re going to be late!" I quickly looked at the time 7:00 Am. I quickly grabbed my skates, ran out of my room and down the stairs. I put my skates on and skated to catch up with my brother.
"Hanataro, you could have waited for me" I whined at him

"You were taking so long." He stated

" Why didn t you wait?" I asked

"Cause Izuru was coming." he said.

Of course. I muttered The walk to school was silent after that. I finally got there, after what seem like 50 years, and went to my locker. Then it hit me, we have a new student a boy who came from Osaka. The first bell rang and I ran to class, not feeling well enough to get yelled at by my math teacher, Toya-sensei. I walked in quietly and a few people waved at me as I sat down. That s when my hell began