Well this is my first time writing a story, so I hope you like it, and please review.
At Mew Mew Cafe, Mark(Masaya) comes to see Zoey(Ichigo) because Zoey need to tell him something, so they sat down at a table and talk about it. Zoey decided to breakup with Mark and Mark says "why do you wanna break up with me? Tell me why!" he told Zoey and Zoey says "Because I am in love with someone else" she told Mark. Mark overreacted and complain. "What is going on here?" ask Elliot(Ryou) "Zoey is breaking up with me" yell Mark. "Why are you breaking up with him if you love him so much?" said Elliot in a I don't care voice. "Because I like someone else" said Zoey in a nervous voice. "WHAT!" yell Elliot. "So who do you like Zoey?" ask Mark in a curious voice. "It is a secret. He is cute, mysterious, and is nice when you get to know him." said Zoey. "Can we get back to work now." said Elliot and Mark left with a loud slam.
"Um... Elliot can we talk?" ask Zoey. "Sure, so whats up?" replied Elliot and Renee(Zakuro), Kikki(Pudding), Bridget(Lettuce), and Corina(Mint) were eavesdropping on them. "Well the boy that I like is really you." said Zoey in a shy voice. What! yell Renee, Kikki, Bridget, and Corina. "I always liked you as a girlfriend and thats why I bought you the dress for the party & I kiss you." said Elliot in a calm voice and kiss Zoey as a surprise kiss.
Well I am gonna continue this story in the first chapter. So please review the first chapter. Thank you...