My first shot at a Star Wars Fan Fiction and my second in progress fiction. If it has flaws (which it will) I want them all detailed and in my PM inbox or as a review so I can improve future writings.
As an extreme Star Wars fan I am sad that I do not own any rights to anything Star Wars.
As a fore note I would like people to tell me any Characters they would like in the story. This is Clone Wars era so have fun with your choices. I don't mind OCs as long as they are not all powerful beings of destruction. It is a POV from inside a lucky clone trooper's bucket so use that to help your choices.
Chapter One: New Friends
So life is good, insertion was good, the droids can't aim for crap and we are pushing through. The reason, good commanders. These Jedi are amazing, cutting a nice path of travel. Well at least it was that good. Now I'm alone cornered and pinned down by some clunkers with nothing but my side arm. I'm Trooper-Oh-Eight-Six Nicknamed "Trip". I've been here for a full five minutes and suspect I'm going to die, just another casualty in this battle. Geonosis is a dust-ball that is now bloodied by this now starting war. I will hold out as long as I can and take as many as I can.
Glancing over the rock that is his current cover Trip is forced back down by a barrage of fire. He lets of a small curse and ducks back down. He tries his comm but finds that it is being jammed and curses before trying his short range helmet radio. His short S.O.S code is picked up but a passing commando squad a few klicks away and are moving to support, one follows up with a calming "Hold in there. Your brothers are coming." Trip is relived and brings up the courage to fire a few shots from his cover scoring two hits and dropping two droids. A few seconds later a 'Whooping' sound is heard over the radio as a commando comes crashing , wrist mounted vibroblade first, into the unsuspecting droids. He easily dispatches two with the blade before three massive cracks fill the air followed by three downed droids. Trip grins, the cavalry is here. He felt a hand on his shoulder and sees another commando, who from the way he spoke was obviously the one who had told him to hold on. He said "Hey brother, I'm Set, Our sniper is Pin, and the crazy one is Grim." Trip looks at Set and asked "Where is your fourth?" Set looks down, "Fallen to a Super Battle Droid. We couldn't stand to lose another brother if we can help it." He looks back up at Trip "You're with us for now." Set and Trip are soon joined by Pin and Grim. Trip quickly asks "What's the mission?" Pin is the first to respond, "We are assaulting an droid production facility and bugging out." Grim adds, "Yeah make big boom too." At this Trip holds in a laugh, he is going to enjoy his time with this team. Set hands him a DC-15 rifle with shotgun attachment. "This was, our fallen brother, Tex's Deece use it well." Trip nods honored by the gesture. Set looks up and throws up a hand signal to move out, "Let's go."
This is kinda short sorry I have that problem with beginnings of stories even ones I like. As I said before I'd love support from others, comments, concerns, tips and anything else.