Hey guys! This is my first fanfiction story ever, and it's a short one at that. But nevertheless, I hope that you enjoy it either way. Please review any which way that you like, I LOVE constructive criticism! You can only learn from making mistakes; and the only way to know is if other people tell you. So without further ado, (I do not know how to spell that :S)
Here is my Rin/Len short-drabble-thingy!
She wears a purple sweater. He wears black jeans. She wears a white bow. He wears headphones. She sits down. He sits down. She pulls out a book from her handbag. He closes his eyes to absorb the music. Her eyes glance to the right. He doesn't notice. She smiles. He opens his eyes. She reads her book. He glances over at her. She doesn't notice. He smiles. She hears a noise. He looks up. They see the train. They get up. She walks ahead. He follows behind. She looks around. He sees that the seats are packed. They walk off. Her shoulders droop. He shrugs it off. They sit down. She starts to text. He taps his foot. She sneezes. He blesses. She smiles. He starts the conversation. She replies. They talk. Trains pass. They don't notice. He looks at his watch. Her eyes widen. He apologizes. She excuses. He smiles. She smiles. They ask to meet again.
The misfortunes of the day bring others together.
So what did you think? It's kind of cheesy I know, but this idea came to me on a whim.
If you enjoyed this, please let me know! I hope to submit more (and better) writing. School is starting soon, so I'm not sure how much time I'll have, but I will try!
See you later!
LlamasEatingUnicorns
(Don't ask me where my username came from, it's really an uninteresting story)