Heya guys! So I know there are millions of other commentaries, 58 to be exact, but I think I would be good at this. Constructive Criticism would be helpful(: thanks.

AN: Special fangz Really, fangz? Really? (get it, coz Im goffik) AHHAHHAHAHAHAHHHA THAT WAS SOOO FUNNY! Not! 2 my gf (ew not in that way) Aw, and for a second i actually thought that this poor girl was Bi just like all the other characters and this poor, poor story. raven, bloodytearz666 4 helpin me wif da story and spelling. Wow, such a great job with the spelling, nice work! -claps hands- -sarcasm- U rok! Justin ur da luv of my deprzzing life u rok 2! Woah, whoa whoa whoa whoa whoa, wait. What/ She has a boyfriend! Dude, lemme tell you something, run while you can! MCR ROX!

Hi, Heya! my name is Ebony Dark'ness Dementia Raven Way What the heck is up with the apostrophe in the middle of Darkness. It's really not needed. Plus, what normal person has 3 middle names? Oh wait, she's not a normal person. and I have long ebony black hair (that's how I got my name) OH REALLY NOW! I never would of guessed! with purple streaks and red tips that reaches my mid-back and icy blue eyes like limpid tears That makes no sense what-so-ever and a lot of people tell me I look like Amy Lee -cough cough- MARY SUE -cough cough- (AN: if u don't know who she is get da hell out of here!) THANK GOODNESS! -runs outta the hell hole-.

I'm not related to Gerard Way but I wish I was because he's a major fucking hottie. Wow, spell it out with me. I-N-S-E-S-T.

I'm a vampire but my teeth are straight and white. Mhm, and so if you look on your left kids you will see a wannabe vampire with no fangs what-so-ever! I have pale white skin. I'm also a witch, and I go to a magic school called Hogwarts in England Ireland. where I'm in the seventh year Oh so you're not only a vampire, but a witch too? M-A-R-Y S-U-E(I'm seventeen).

I'm a goth (in case you couldn't tell) Nope, I never could understand exactly what you were. So now its a Gothic Vampire Witch who goes to Hogwarts in IRELAND not England. and I wear mostly black. I love Hot Topic and I buy all my clothes from there Oh yes, cause that means you are SOOOO Gothic, I shop at hot topic and I am by no means Gothic.

For example today I was wearing a black corset with matching lace around it and a black leather miniskirt, pink fishnets and black combat boots. I was wearing black lipstick, white foundation, black eyeliner and red eye shadow blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, BLAH! No one cares honestly!

I was walking outside Hogwarts. It was snowing and raining so there was no sun, which I was very happy about OMG SOMEONE CALL THE METEOROLOGIST! I have just made an important discovery! there can be RAIN and SNOW AT THE SAME TIME! A lot of preps stared at me. I put up my middle finger at them Yep, cause that's the way to be friendly and make friends.

"Hey Ebony!" shouted a voice. I looked up. It was suspense. …. Draco Malfoy! OMG -GASP-

"What's up Draco?" I asked.

"Nothing." he said shyly. Draco Malfoy? Shy? I don't think we are talking about the same Draco..

But then, I heard my friends call me and I had to go away.

AN: IS it good? PLZ tell me fangz! No this is awful. -bangs her head against her keyboard-

A/N: I FIXED THE SPELLING!