OoC: Ok you guys have heard me mention this halloween story for a while now but now I actually have an idea so... let's get started shall we

Most people usually wouldn't belive me if I told them this but what your about to read is 100% absolutly true, It all started last halloween, actually it was a week before halloween. Me and my friend Xion were walking to the mall trying to find costumes for halloween, and thats when it all went down hill

Mall

"hmmm" Xion said looking at the various costumes "I can't decide what I'm going to be" Xion turned toward Ryan "What are you going to be" Xion asked. "I don't know" Ryan said "Besides this is the womens department for costumes I'll find mine later". "Ok fine" Xion said continuing to look. "how about a vampire" Xion asked. "Too overdone" Ryan said. "A werewolf?" "Too easy" "Devil?" "You went as that last year". "Agh Fine" Xion said grabing Ryan by the arm and draged him.

"What are you doing" Ryan said. "C'mon let's go find your costume first maybe it'll get me an idea" Xion said draging Ryan through the store.

Costume: Mens department

Ryan sighed looking at all the costumes. (She does this every year) Ryan thought. (when she can't decide she let's me pick out a costume then finds another costume to match it). "Well c'mon chose one" Xion said. Ryan looked at Xion. She's a black haired girl with a perky personallity. She wares a black and pink striped t-shirt with black pants. her shoes were a birght orange.

"ugh" Ryan said looking at the costumes again. (This will take forever) Ryan thought. "aww can't decide" Xion said "Let's get some food It'll help you think" Xion started walking toward the entrence to the store.

Food court

Ryan had a burger with large fries on the plate infront of him. Xion had a large shake. "So find anything that caught your intrest" Xion asked in between sips. "nothing special just costumes most people have dressed as for 1000s of years" Ryan said taking a large bite of his burger. "The worse part of halloween is finding a costume, the rest of it is pretty easy" Xion said.

Ryan started looking around the food court. "Hey are you listening" Xion asked. A store caught Ryan's eye. It was a solid black color, brick walling, with a spiderweb looking door, the windows were tinted a blackish color

On the top of the store was a sign writen in big red bloddy leters. ("The horor house") Ryan thought.

"hey what ya looking at" Xion asked moving her gaze to match Ryan's. "Hey that looks promising" Xion said "C'mon" Xion grabed Ryan's hand and started pulling him toward the store. "Xion wait my burger" Ryan said

Horor house

A terrifying scream came out from the depts of the store as Ryan and Xion walked in. "Whoa coool" Xion said looking at various halloween decorations, costumes, and various nicknacks. "Ryan we should have came here first". "This skeleton looks so real" Xion said reaching out for it. Ryan turned away looking at various jewery. There was a spider ring, a bracelet that looked like a catapiller, and finally a strange necklace with rocky runes over it.

The necklace had a cat shaped rock hanging from it. Ryan picked it up and examined it. (how strange) Ryan thought. "AH IT'S GOT ME, IT'S GOING TO RIP MY ARM OFF" Xion yelled.

Chapter 1 finished OoC: Let me know what you think and any ideas on improvement will gladly be taken into concerderation.