Chatting with Ichiruki

This is the first time I wrote this fiction, so please don't be harsh…

And English is not my first language

So please let me know if wetheter I made some mistake in the grammar etc.

And review pleaseeee….

Disclaimer : I don't own Bleach and the stuff… hiks hiks

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Chappynisama12 : Hey, Ichigo. This is really you, isn't?

Bankaichigo79 : Of course this is me, Rukia. Why you brother to ask?

Chappynisama12 : Oh nothing… It's just.. your username is really weird.

Can't you rename it?

Bankaichigo79 : What? Look at yours self, Midget. Yours is the one who really weird.

Why you used Byakuya name,huh?

Chappynisama12 : Call him Kuchiki Ni-sama you fool! You can't call him by his first name, baka.

Bankaichigo79 : Ngeh… Don't ever forced me, Rukia. Btw, what are you doing now?

Chappynisama12 : Hm… Chatting with you in your bed. You should let me sleep in your bed sometimes Ichigo. This is better than in your damn closet.

Bankaichigo79 : Wait a minute. What are you doing in my bed beside chatting with me?

Chappynisama12 : Nothing. Oh I just ate a piece of cake that Yuzu made.

Bankaichigo79 : You didn't ate it in my OWN BED, did you?

Chappynisama12 : What if I say yes, Ichigo?

Bankaichigo79 : I will rip you into a pieces, Rukia. Or maybe the worst, I will tell about your bad attitude to Byakuya.

Chappynisama12 : Don't be so dramatic, Ichigo. I know you can't do that. Beside it is just a bed.

Bankaichigo79 : Oh I will Rukia. Just see.

Chappynisama12 : Whatever, Ichigo. Btw, when will you go home?

Bankaichigo79 : What was that, Midget? Did you just say that you missed me?

Chappynisama12 : No you fool! It is just…being with Kon is not fun at all. And I have to fight those hollows alone. I'm tired you know.

Bankaichigo79 : I thought that shinigami like you will never give up, Rukia. You're not human after all.

Chappynisama12 : I'm not give up you know. I'm just tired. And what does it suppose to be mean, Strawberry?

Bankaichigo79 : Never mind. Maybe I will go home tomorrow. This is the fifth day I'm here. Why don't you take a extracurricular in school? You can join some programs that given by each of those extra. At least you can be far away from home.

Chappynisama12 : Your home, you mean?

Bankaichigo79 : Our home, Midget. We are a family now.

Chappynisama12 : Don't take me for a fool, Ichigo. We are from different world.

Bankaichigo79 : Then why you are here, Midget? There's should be a reason for that.

Bankaichigo79 : Hey, Midget. Still there?

Chappynisama12 : Don't call me midget, Strawberry. It's getting late. See you tomorrow.

Bankaichigo79 : Okay. See you.

Chappynisama12 : Hey, Ichigo.

Bankaichigo79 : Hm?

Chappynisama12 : Can I sleep in your bed tonight?

Bankaichigo79 : Sure, Rukia.

I hope it's not to bad.. hehehe :D