TITLE: Bonds and Bitter Rivalries.
Hello fellow fanfic lovers since there are no good naruto fanfics
where an OC Is trained/teamed with Zabuza I decided to write one Here
it is. Ps. In the beginning of this fanfic Paul is a chunin of the
Hidden Mist Village And Zabuza is a Jounin there.
Paul momochi wake up in a small little house and he put on his clothes
and wake your older brother up. "Zabuza get up its almost time for my
jounin exam." "Alright Paul gimme a minute" He says as he gets up and
puts on his gear. 'it's funny how much of his style rubbed off on me'
Paul thinks as he goes over his and Zabuza's similarities noticing
they both have the same black tank top, the same white mask which
covers Paul and Zabuza's mouth and nose, and the same black ninja
pants. The only thing that's different is their weapons. While Zabuza
took a really large sword Paul choose to wield chakra blades.
The momochi brothers ( Paul and Zabuza) head over the the place where
the jounin exams are happening. The exam will be proctored by the
mizukage and me said the head jounin of the village. The Last 3 alive
or conscious will become Jounin. 'Simple all I will have to do is hide
until 2 are left or beat all but 2'. Paul thinks as the Head Jounin
rambles on. Suddenly Zabuza nudges Paul and he snaps back to reality
to see two other chunin, the mizukage and the head Jounin are heading
towards the center of the village where the Lake of Power is. (The
lake of power is what gives the village it's name it is a big lake
giving off a dense fog and mist which gets less dense the further you
are from the village[YES I KNOW I MADE THAT UP DON'T FLAME]) Paul
catches up to them and soon enough they all arrive there. There are
about 10 chunin at the beginning of the fight and while Paul waits
hidden amongst the mist for his opportunity to strike and claim Jounin
status like his Older brother. Paul smirks underneath his mask as he
thinks how easy this is going to be'. Paul suddenly jumps out of his
hiding spot as he hears a slight whistle coming towards his spot. A
explosion happened where he was hiding. Once Paul lands he turns and
glares at the chunin who threw the kunai with the explosive tag. "So
you think you can make Jounin by being a coward huh?" He smirks. Paul
pulls out his chakra blades as he says "It's called Strategy maybe you
should give it a try instead of rushing in blindly." Paul taunts, Paul
throws a shuriken at the guy and he dodges it. He rushed at Paul and
try to stab him with a kunai. Paul pushes it away and goes for an
uppercut. The blades barely miss, but when Paul thrusts them back down
they impale themselves in the guys shoulders. "Too easy" Paul says right before the guy before him explodes into water. "A water clone shit" He quickly hides as he searches for his opponent when suddenly,The mizukage's voice echos around the water. He says "CongratulationsThere are now only three remaining conscious chunin. You are all nowJounin of Kirikagure." Paul Grins as he goes back to the place whereThe Mizukage and everyone else are. When Paul gets there he ispresented with everything a Mist Village Jounin gets and is assigned apartner Jounin. "I choose my brother, Zabuza Momochi." Paul predicted Paul would say this so it's no surprise they lethim train alongside Zabuza.
Well that was chapter one what do you guys think please don't flame
this is my first fanfic in a long time so I hope you liked it. If you
have any suggestions let me know and ps I may need a beta reader and maybe an editor because i can't figure out how to do line breaks and all that crap sorry.