-NOTE TO MY FELLOW STAR WARS DEVOTEES-

THIS IS A VERY ROUGH DRAFT. I KNOW THERE IS A LOT I HAVE TO WORK ON. I ONLY RECENTLY FOUND IT AGAIN. I STILL HAVE TO ADD DETAILS ABOUT THE LIGHTSABER TECHNIQUES, THE PLANET, THE TWO CHARACTERS, AND OTHER VARIOUS DETAILS. BE KIND AND REMEMBER IT'S JUST A START

"Kael you can open you eyes now," Knight ul-Esca said softly as she put her hand on the little girl's shoulder.

Kael Fen had kept her eyes closed as the massive space ship began to land. Though she had been on the station for days she was still very uneasy about space travel. Kael preferred to have her feet on the ground.

She had traveled a great distance on the (space ship) which had become a rescue ship for the many Jedi Masters, Knights, and Padawans. The station they had been on, the Chu'unthor, had served as a mobile Jedi academy. Recently it had crashed on the planet Dathmoir. It had been a long stalemate between the Jedi and the Nightsisters, a clan of Force-sensitive women, but the Jedi had been able to leave the planet though not without leaving a vast archive behind them.

Kael's mother had snuck her aboard the ship to the Masters, unknown to the Nightsisters who would have sensed Kael's Force-sensitivity and taken her as one of their own. The Masters had taken her in and her mother had known it would be a better life.

Now Kael had landed on Coruscant and was ready to train for life as a Jedi.

Kael slowly opened her eyes and what she saw made her mouth drop open.

The Coruscant skyline glittered like dozens of jewels as the sun set over the horizon. It was beautiful. Kael had seen many sun sets in Dathomir but none were like this.

(Go into detail about sunset, structures, traffic, and other stuff)

Then Kael saw a magnificence that took her breath away. It was a sight that would stay in her memory forever.

The building that the transport continued to fly to was massive and beautiful in a very simple manner.

It stood at least a kilometer high, dwarfing Coruscant's other buildings around it. The building itself reminded Kael of a mountain. Kael saw that it had been built like a pyramid but the top part had been cut off.

That didn't make sense to her. Kael wanted to ask Knight Ainvar ul-Esca about it. The middle of the four sides stuck out slightly from the building. The most interesting parts however, were the five tall towers that came up from the top of the cut off pyramid. They were an off-white color, near the corners and the tallest one stood in the center of all of them.

The transport landed and the Jedi began to file out. Kael followed silently, still marveling at the sight before her.

Kael suddenly felt so small in front of the tall building. The Rancors on Dathomir had frightened her because of their size but looking at this structure, Kael felt like a small grain of sand peering out into a vast ocean.

Looking up at the building Kael had stopped dead in her tracks. Now the other Initiates and Jedi were walking around her and making their way into the building. Kael could barely move she stood in silent awe at the ecliptic building before her.

Kael felt a hand on her shoulder and she turned around to face Knight ul-Esca.

"Kael are you alright?" She asked gently.

"It's so big," said Kael. Her voice was barely a whisper.

Knight ul-Esca smiled. "I know I felt the same way when I first saw the Temple. But I think you'll learn to grow into it," she told Kael.

"I'm afraid," said Kael in a soft voice.

"Never be afraid," said Knight ul-Esca. "I know you will do fine."

Kael looked up at the Jedi Knight. She gave a small smile. It wavered a bit but Kael was ready.

"Would you like to walk in with me?" The tall Knight asked.

"Okay," said Kael. She started to walk into the Temple. Knight ul-Esca followed right behind her.

Kael walked into the building and found it was very cool inside. The Temple was massive, like the outside and subtly decorated. Knight ul-Esca led Kael and the rest of the Younglings to the center of one of the entrances.

Knight ul-Esca began to talk of the Temple. Like most of the other Younglings Kael was too busy taking in the new world around her to notice. As Knight ul-Esca finished the small group of Younglings started to break up for further tours of Temple.

Kael turned around and suddenly found herself face-to-face with a small green…creature.

He was shorter than Kael with large pointed ears that stuck out from his head. He was slightly hunched over and used a cane to walk. Thin white hair was pushed back from his wrinkled head and face. His skin was a mucky green color but his eyes shone brightly.

Kael took a step back in surprise and the little creature smiled.

"Great things we will see in you Youngling," said the creature in a raspy voice.

Kael couldn't respond. She had never seen anything like him before on Dathomir.

The little creature smiled again and walked off.

Someone laid a hand on Kael's shoulder. She looked up and again and saw Knight ul-Esca.

"Who was that?" Kael asked.

"That was Master Yoda," Knight ul-Esca said. "He is the greatest of the Jedi. Master Yoda is both wise and strong. He is a great leader and inspiration to us all."

Knight of ul-Esca gave Kael a curious look. "What did he say to you young one?" She asked.

Kael thought back on what it was. "It was something like: great things we will see in you," she answered. It didn't make much sense.

Knight ul-Esca smiled. "Then we will," she said simply.