I may hand it in as the creative response *shudder* to the poetry unit I'm doing in English, so reviews are extra happy.


How can I love you? I'll try to explain

I love you in the deepest, unseen space

Within my heart this sense grows out of place

Though my mind protests: this cannot be sane.

I love you even as the thread unwinds

While every breath, mundane, proves existence

I love you, though caged by choices of chance

I love you: stained with the taint of Cast and Mind

I love you with passion allowed by night

In which ideals of past, haunt my new found due

Love, I learnt and lost in you, my plight:

I love you with the love I never knew

In the nest I quickly flew, I love you here

Without agenda: if my fates prove right

I will love you, when death does take Love dear