Hi, everyone! This is my first fanfiction I've ever written. So, I would like to ask your opinion, whether it is good or not, should I continue this story, and what things I should improve. Be honest! :D Since my native language is
not English, there can be some strange things, but you can say it, so I can improve my English as well.
So, review it please! :D
The Great Pirate Games
The Mugiwara Crew was finally in the New World. As everyone told it, it was really hard to sail in those wild waters. Everyone had to be really cautious, especially Nami, who had a really hard time to navigate the ship.
in this part of the Grand Line. She was very grateful for those old men on that Sky Island, that they taught her a lot of things about how to navigate a ship in the New World.
They were in the New World for more than two month already. They had just passed through a really great storm, and everyone was lying on the deck exhausted and breathed really hard. After a few minutes their hyperactive captain's voice could be heard:
„Woow… that was fun! Now I am hungry! Sanji MEAT!"
„Shut up shitty captain, let me catch my breath first!"
„But I am hungry!"
„That's not a new thing"
Sanji started to get up slowly, he knew, that Luffy wouldn't stop whining until he got some food, so he made his way to the kitchen.
Luffy looked around the deck, which was really messy from the storm. Although he said it was fun, he knew very well, that this storm was really dangerous, and if Nami is not with them, they would have not make it! He was very proud of his navigator, but of course he was very proud of everyone. After two years, everyone changed, but of course in a positive way. They become stronger.
A few days ago they had a really peaceful night, when everyone gathered on the deck and shared some stories about the two years when they were separated. Luffy was amazed how everyone did his or her best to get back to him, to get stronger for him. Even without the stories, Luffy knew that he found the best crew in the world, but after he heard each of the stories he was absolutely sure, that his crew was unbeatable and with them,
he would become the king of the pirates.
Luffy was staring at his navigator; she was lying on the grassy deck and breathed really hard. This storm was the biggest they met, and she had to concentrate really hard in order to get through it safely, and she was totally exhausted, she couldn't move.
"Oi Nami! Are you ok?" asked Luffy with concern.
"Yeah. I'm just really tired. I think I should go back to my room to get some sleep."
"Yeah, you should. By the way, when we will reach the next island?"
"Well, I'm not sure, but I think two or three days from now. I hope that it won't be anything dangerous, because we really need a good rest."
"Yeah, you're right!"
Of course Luffy was hoping, that on the next island there would be some interesting stuff, or that he can go on an advanture, but he saw, that everyone really, really need to relax a bit. Especially Nami. Luffy knew that without her they couldn't move an inch. She was very important.
After dinner, everyone went to sleep, and hoped that the other day would be more peaceful.
For everyone's happiness the night was very quiet, and everyone could sleep peacefully. After breakfast everyone went to do their usual things. Zoro was sleeping in the crow's nest, Nami was drawing maps, Usopp help Franky with his new investment, Sanji was making snacks to his beloved ladies, Chopper was reading medical book with Robin, and Brook was playing a soft music on his violin.
Luffy was relaxing on his usual spot on the figure head, when something hit his face. He opened his eyes and found a paper and a little pack on his lap. On the paper:
The Great Pirate Games
Do you want to know how strong your crewmates are?
Then take the eternal pose from the package
and bring your crew to Dur Island!
It is the biggest pirate game in the world.
The winner will be famous for having the best crew in the world!
The first round will be held on Dur Island and only
the captain, the first mate and the navigator can take part in!
As a crew without these three people is not a real crew,
we would like to see how strong they are first!
Further information about the second round will be
provided after you passed the first round!
Every crew who passed the first round will get 100.000.000 berri!
Don't hesitate! Come and prove that your crew is
the best in the world!
Meet at Dur Island in two weeks!
Luffy's eyes were shining brightly as he was reading the paper. He immediately jumped from the figure head, rushed to the observation room where Nami was drawing her maps. Luffy barged in the room with so much energy that he managed to scare his poor navigator. Now the map was ruined and she was furious.
"What are you doing here, you stupid moron? Do you know what does "knocking on the door before you enter it" mean?
"Yeah! I'm sorry, but I'm so excited! You should see this immediately!"
"What?" she asked as Luffy gave her the paper. She started to read but only until she read that in the first round just the captain, the first mate and the navigator had to take part."
"Forget it Luffy! I'm too tired for this!"
"But Namiiiii! It'll be fun. And it will be only in two weeks. You can rest!"
"As for the previous two weeks, I don't think so!"
"Please! I know you can do it! You are the best navigator in the whole world!"
Nami a bit blushed because of his statement. He never said such thing to her before, and it made her really happy that he thinked so! But something was off about this event. And she didn't think it would be a good idea to take part in such a doubtful event.
"Thanks Luffy, but I think it is too dangerous, we haven't even heard about such kind of game, it can be a trap."
"But if it is not a trap, we can have a big adventure. Don't worry I will protect you."
Nami started to blush again. What the hell happened with Luffy to say such things to her? He really wanted to take part in this game. And why was she blushing? Well, now she shrugged it off, she was more concentrated to persuade Luffy not to go to this event.
"Please Nami, say YES. I need you." whined Luffy.
Nami was started to lose her patience and blushed more. Meanwhile Luffy put the paper in front of his face and continued Nami's persuading!
Nami was about to protest again when she looked at the paper once again and found a certain number on it. Suddenly she grabbed the paper from Luffy's hand and started to read it again, and soon her eyes become berry signs. Then she looked at Luffy.
"You know what! I changed my mind! We will take part in this event, and we will win!"
Luffy was a bit surprised for the sudden changing, but soon he started to cheer and out of blue he hugged Nami!
"Thanks Nami! You're the best!" Nami was almost fainted from the sudden act.
"Ok ok Luffy just calm down! We need to discuss it with the crew as well."
Soon everyone was gathered on the grassy deck and Luffy show them the paper.
"So guys, what do you think? Isn't it a great challenge?"
"We should totally take part in it! Now I can show the world how brave Captain Usopp-sama is!" said Usopp while his legs are trembling furiously.
"Usopp your legs…" said Chopper.
"Don't worry, it just because of the excitement!" Of course Chopper believed him.
"I want to go to! I'm also brave!" said the little reindeer.
"If Nami-swan and Robin-chwan agree to go I'm also in!" said Sanji in his love-love mode.
"This sounds SUPAAA" (guess who said this )
"I want to take part in it with all my heart! But wait, I have no heart! Yohohohoho, skull joke! Plus I hope I can see your pan…"
"Of course not!" said Nami while hitting Brook hard on his head!
Luffy was happy that everyone was in it. Now just Zoro left, who was sleeping against the railing.
"Oi Zoro wake up! I have an important question!" shouted Luffy.
Zoro slowly opened his one good eye.
"Haaa… What?"
Luffy gave Zoro the paper, who just glanced at it and read the first few line.
"What do you think Zoro? You want to go too, don't you?"
"Whetever. If you want it, I take part in it!"
Zoro was a very loyal crewmember of Luffy and he always did what Luffy told him, he trusted him.
"Yosh! This is decided! Set sail to Dur Island!"
Luffy gave Nami the eternal pose. As Nami gave the necessary orders to everyone to change the course, she had a bad feeling, that something is wrong and something big will happen in this event, and not definitely a positive thing. She couldn't tell. But then she reminded herself of the money and forgot all the troubles. And besides, she trusted in Luffy's words that he will protect her.
So, what do you think? Sorry if it was a bit confusing or something, but everyone has to start it from somewhere. :) That is why I need your review.
Thanks very much for reading it! :)