Author's notes: Sorry I haven't been on I've been around playing FFXIII…XD Yeah I finally beat it so hopefully I can make more of these….lol btw this is a spin off from the original I guess you say this is a total remake of my friends but his English is horrible so yeah let's see what I can do beware this is prequel / post game

Disclaimer: I do not own FFXIII square enix does I just the story and yeah etc etc enjoy

The starting line

Saint Oreba/ Oreba Yun

2 years since the calamity of cocoon and Gran Pulse Fang and Vanille woke up shortly after their focus was complete so she and the team walked around the archete steppe. And saw a man walking in a white robe as he looked into the sky. Fang only knew of the one man who wore a robe like that whom she knew as big brother. She ran toward the man and grabbed his sleeve and hope for it to be her brother. He then turned around and looked at Fang with a blank face. Then Fang jumped back near her group. Lightning then said in a concerned tone. "What is it fang?"

Fang then yelled at the man in an angry tone. "Who are you what do you want your not from cocoon or gran pulse are you?" The man then tilted his head and looked at fang's lance and soon said in calm voice. "Are you a pulsian of the Yun clan?" Fang then gripped her lance tighter than usual and glared at him mercilessly and said in a suspicious tone. "Yeah and how'd you know are you a completed L'ciel?" He looked down at the ground and smiled softly at Fang and said calmly as usually "no I'm not a L'ciel but I am a f'ciel" Fang then felt mocked and said in a angered tone. "That's it you're through" Vanille then stopped Fang . Fang then looked at Vanille and said her name in a worried tone. Vanille then started to think about Pulse history and how'd it talk about a f'ciel who had didn't even looked like a F'ciel and then shouted and surprised everyone.

"You're the immortal, that's who you are isn't it?"

The immortal then appalled Vanille in her correct answer and said he would rather be called Seth than the immortal. Lightning and the others didn't know a lick of pulse history except the war. Lightning then shouted "How do you know Fang? Answer me Seth!"

"Saint Oreba…" he spoke those words. . .Fang then asked " And what does he have to with anything huh?" Seth then asked another question. "Do you know where your name came from Fang?" Fang then started to think and said No but why does it matter? Seth sighed and said "Saint Oreba was you're great grandfather"

TBC (to be continued)

Author's notes 2: so tell me what you think so far and I don't mind accepting the truth but no trolling please(meaning: don't bring people down etc)

So yeah tell me whether or not I should continue it okay bye