Re-Write of my story the Spirit Detective and the Forbidden Child

The first chapter is almost exactly the same (I honestly copy and pasted it) but the new chapters will be different.

:) Please Enjoy

"Words" = talking

'Words' = thinking

Normal POV

Yusuke ran down the street in search of his girlfriend, Keiko. Today was their anniversary and Yusuke had gotten her a gift. He finally found her friends and since they were scared of him they told him where she was then they quickly ran away. He smirked and ran off again. He finally heard Kieko talking under the bleachers but he couldn't hear what she was saying. He ran to the edge and ducked under them "Hey Keiko! happy anni...vers...ary..." He said as he stared wide eyed at Keiko kissing some other boy. She turned to him shocked "Y-Yusuke!" She shouted trying to come up with an excuse. Yusuke glared and, throwing her gift on the ground, he ran off.

Yusuke POV
I ran and ran until I could barely breathe and I collapsed on a park bench. Luckily no one was around. I looked up at the darkened sky and realized it was probably going to rain soon. I really couldn't bring myself to care, I felt like all of a sudden my world was empty. I thought Keiko was supposed to be my soulmate. Suddenly there was a voice behind me the snapped me out of my thoughts "What's wrong with you detective?" I turned to look at the person speaking and I was surprised to see Hiei "oh hey Hiei. It's just human problems you wouldn't understand..." I said looking down. I wanted him to help maybe even needed him but I knew he would call me weak and I couldn't deal with that right now. I was surprised again to feel Hiei sit down right next to me on the bench "Explain it then..." He said and his voice lacked the usual harsh and mocking tone.

I found myself telling him everything about what dating was, my relationship with Keiko, and her cheating on me. Hiei just listened occasionally asking questions. I finished and buried my head in my hands. I hadn't been this depressed in a long time. Hiei hadn't said anything for awhile and I half expected he had left. His voice surprised me once again "Detective?" He asked and if I hadn't know better I would've said he sounded nervous. I looked up and he hesitated "...I-" the rest of his sentence was cut off by a flash of lightning and a crash of thunder. Then the sky open up and started to pour rain. In seconds we were both soaked. I sighed and looked to Hiei who had an unreadable look on his face. "I've gotta go!" I shouted over the storm. He nodded but didn't move "Where're you gonna stay?!" I asked remembering he couldn't stay at Kurama's house because he had gone to college in America. Hiei shrugged and I grabbed his hand "You can stay with me!" I said and didn't give him time to reply before I ran to my house dragging him the whole way.

We got into my house and I tried to catch my breathe. Hiei glared at me but he didn't leave. Instead he looked around and I felt a little embarrassed because my mom had gone out drinking and the house was a mess. He didn't seem to mind and sat on the couch. I shrugged and grabbed some dry clothes and threw some at him. He stared for a minute "you're gonna get sick if you don't change." I said and he frowned but pulled of his cloak. His shirt came off next and I couldn't help staring. He was practically the definition of the perfect figure. He had abs of steel and gently sloping hips. He reached to pull his pants off and I unfroze. "I'm gonna get changed!" I said a little too loudly and ran into the bathroom blushing madly. I closed the door and leaned against it. My legs gave out and I slid to the ground. My face was burning. 'What's wrong with me? I'm acting like a little school girl!' I thought to myself. I slowly got up and got dressed.

When I walked back downstairs Hiei was wearing my old green jacket which was too big for him so his fingers barely poked out and it went down to below his hips but his pale thighs were exposed and seeing them made my legs feel a little weak. He wasn't wearing any pants and I blushed "H-Hiei?" He looked up "w-why aren't y-you wearing pants?!" I asked and he shrugged "yours are too big and mine are wet." He said like it was no big deal. I blushed but sat down next to him. I turned on the TV and Hiei's eyes widened, "Detective?" He asked and I looked at him, his eyes were comically wide and his mouth was open ever so slightly in shock. He stared at me with horrored awe "Why are there little people in the black box?" He asked and I couldn't help laughing even though he sent me a death glare. After I finally calmed down I explained TV to him and we watched TV for hours. Hiei occasionally asked questions about human culture and I did the best I could to explain. Of course there were a few things I really couldn't explain but he seemed to enjoy the ridiculous stories I made up. Then again, he was Hiei. you could never know what he was thinking.

After I yawned for the 5th time 10 minutes Hiei turned to me, "Detective if you're tired then go to sleep." He said and I put a mock hurt expression on my face "Aw tired of me already Hiei?" I asked and he rolled his eyes. For another hour we watched infomercials. I closed my eyes and sighed. 'Keiko had cheated on me today... I'm not as sad as I should be...' Suddenly I felt a weight on my shoulder. I looked down at Hiei. He had fallen asleep and fallen onto my shoulder. He was kind of beautiful when you looked past the glare he always wore. He looked peaceful and innocent when he slept. Come to think of it even when he was glaring he had this look like... Like... I couldn't explain it. Maybe it was just the way he looked at me because no one else seemed to notice. There was a fluttering feeling in my stomach at the thought that Hiei looked at me differently than everyone else. Hiei mumbled something incoherent in his sleep and I wrapped my arms around him. Using my awesome skills I moved us into a laying position. He snuggled against my chest in his sleep. I smiled. He would never do this if he was awake. My eyes got heavy and I surrendered to sleep.

I know Yusuke was acting weird but he did just lose the love of his life and his childhood friend all at once. Hope you enjoyed! Leave a comment!