THIS FANFICTION IS SET DURING THE END OF DIVERGENT WHEN ALL THE DAUNTLESS SOLDIERS ARE BRAIN DEAD. IT IS BASED FROM THE BOOK MORE THAN THE FILM.
TRIS:
Tobias grabbed my wrist, we were running, he was pulling me forward, running faster than I had ever ran before, I concentrated on Tobias's breathing making sure my inhaling and exhaling were synchronized with his.
We had just been held at gun point, by the Dauntless traitors; Eric and his friend . We got away safely, I'm not particularly sure how though.
I heard a gun fire. The pain was disorienting. They shot me in the right shoulder. Ouch. Something rough scraped my cheek, it was the pot hole in the floor. I could vaguely see Tobias, he had stopped me fall fast by the grip on my arm, he was now kneeling next to my head. I couldn't read his face.
"Run" I gasped.
Tobias shook his head and calmly my ears registered the word: "No."
Tobias carefully placed his arm around my left holding me up by my waist. My vision was patchy, the plain, dull, grey Abnegation buildings turning darker shades of black. We weren't moving fast enough. A small groan of frustration and pain leaves my mouth. I wasn't afraid of being in pain in front of Tobias. I trust him. I was scared of being in pain.
Tobias stops and turns himself to face me. We held our eyes, and for a second everything felt okay. His eyes manipulating me to a different world. Tobias's mouth fell into a grim line. "Okay." He said then turned and lifted me on top of his back, all my weight was with him, we were moving fast but not as fast as before. His strength I had forgotten to acknowledge slapped me in the face. Or maybe it was that I was so close to falling into that subconscious black hole of Abnegation were spinning around me.