I'm really bored right now and I decided to comment on this … thing.

Aothors (Okay, so she spelled the first word wrong? I'm actually killing my spell-check to do that.) note; ok! Leik sooo high guyz!dis iz my now fanficton!so it is caled: You're life with Ron Wesley! (It took me a while to figure out what that's supposed to mean)

Sooooo leik im a hugeeeee harry potter fan! I think dat Rupert grift is totally the hawtest guy evar! ^_^ (Aww, look a smiley)

I leik love how his hair iz like red, and it leik gos over his eyes alittle. It makes him look alittle emo, but nawt 2 emo so its god! (First: Why is she saying "like" all the time? Second: Why is it god?)

BTW, a luv emo boiz there sooooooooo hawt and coot! (Dumbledore? What an old coot! He's nothing like Rumbleroar! Rumbleroar is the headmaster of Pigfarts. He's a lion who can talk. Oh god, I'm such a StarKid!) Im also emo! I cutt my rist sumtimes, (Yes, that's totally something that I would tell others) and I just died my hair blak! Itz really really really coot! (Oh, I just realised that this is supposed to mean cute)

Ok! Sooooooooooo I should probly start da story now1! Looololloll.(Oh god, here we go again with the random ones)

I just woke up! (How interesting. And why is there and exclamation point?) I puled bak the curtins an outcide I c the sunbeem coming thu my window! (I don't know why she doesn't use real words) "Itz a nice day out" I say. (Yes, when I'm alone in my room then I totally talk to myself. No, seriously, I do that – sometimes) I taik of my pijuamas. I waz sleping in a verry cootblak top. (And here we go with the clothes – description) It was kind of like a spots bra butt a litle lunger cuz im not a slut lol (Of course not. And when I tell someone that I'm not a slut then I always say lol). Then I taik of my pijamas. They where blak to!And they r realy comforty becuz they r fluffy (I like fluffy things. They're awesome)

IM GOING 2 NOT DECRIBE MYSELF NACKED BECUZ THTS GROSSE! DNT THINK ABOUT THAT! (No-one ever said that they want you to describe yourself naked, and actually I never read a story in which someone described themselves naked)

After I put on my new clothers I feeled very comforty! Ill explain wat I wpre! (And here we go again *sigh*)

I had new shoes on! I just bout them yesterday wit the money my parets sent me for fun! (I love it when my parents give me money for fun. They should do it more often) They were leik sports runing shoes (except I hate! Exercise! (I like dancing and running. And also why is there an exclamation point?)) they were blak with pink laces! Verry veryy coott! (There are three words in this sentence and they are all spelled wrong) Every1 told me thiey where jealus of them becuz they cost a lot of money! (Oh, that's great. See the sarcasm) (pplz were loking at them in the story 4ever in hogmeadas (What?)so I told my parnts (She told her pants abought them? Oh, she told her parents about them!) abought them n they sent me the money 2 by them b4 any1 else could! (Oh, how nice of you! I would love to have you as my friend. *Sarcasm*)) (ooo! I go to Hogwarts btw, becuz I dnt think I mentioned it yet!1 (Oh thank you, because I never would have guessed).)

Then 4 my pants I wore lather. (they where blak 2!) my bum lookd very nice in them becuz pplz tell me my but is VERRRYY nicelol! (People tell you your but is very nice? Oh, that is tiring)

My shirt was blak 2 but wit like sum pink skuls like one the buttom a rond the hole shit! (What? Why is she wearing shit?) It waz very coot!

Soooooooo! When I finshed geting dresed I waked (What?) down the stairzzz! I entred the slythrin commun room an then pplz turned to stair at me! (Because you looked so horrible?) Every1 told me I was butiful! (Aww, crap)

Sooooooooo many nice complimonts lololololol! (They all hate you)

So I told them I aprecated it an then walked out of the commun room down 2 the gate hall! (Er, what?)

While I was eating my creal (witch (lolololol get it? (I did get it and it was not funny! And why do people always have to point their puns out?)) was rice crispries) some1 taped (Taped? Okay) the bak of my shulder! I turned arond. 'im trying 2 eat her!' (What an asshole! And who is she trying to eat?) I scramed at the persone becuz whoever it was is veryyyyyyyy rude to intrupt me whale im eating! (Whale? Okay. And also it's much ruder to shout at someone who tries to talk to you)

But when I saw who I was stairing at I forgot al about my angre! (There were almost not many mistakes in that sentence) 2 b continued ! (NOOOO!) (tell me wat u think! (Okay, I'll tell you what I think: That was almost worse than My Immortal.

33333333333 Why are there random threes?