Hey everyone! This is my first fan fic up on the site. I'd love to hear your reviews! Advice appreciated! -liz9591
DISCLAIMER: I do not own Kingdom Hearts. If I did, no one would have died. Except maybe Vexen. Guy creeps me out.
Vexen: I have studied her hormone output when she is near me, and this seems to be true.
Me: See what I mean?
I mindlessly kicked a pebble in front of me. I didn't know where I was or where I was going. I knew from some distant memory that I was sixteen, and my name was Eliza, but not much else.
As I walked along, a man in a long, hooded, black coat blocked my path.
"You seek answers," the strange man told me in his deep voice, "I can give you purpose." The letters of my name appeared in front of me. I instead studied the man in front of me. He had long, blue hair that had a slight silver coloring to it done in a spiky, flat, yet elegant hairdo. His piercing, golden eyes seemed to stare into my soul, and I could see into his. I saw a dark and lonely place, filled with sadness and undying loyalty, but all of this hidden from the world by a cape of anger. I forced my gaze away from his and back to the swirling letters in front of me. An "X" appeared in the chaotic mixing, and the letters finally settled.
"Zilexa," I whispered, seemingly under my breath, reading the word in front of me.
"Yes, your new name. Come with me, Zilexa, and discover your true destiny," he guided me. The mysterious man summoned a dark portal and disappeared into it. I followed at his heels, and the portal closed behind us.
I was given a coat almost identical to the man's, but the zipper was a lime green color, and the drawstrings to adjust the hood had a golden tint that I had not seen on his coat. I liked it. I was then led to "Where Nothing Gathers," their conference hall.
"Pitiful heartless, mindlessly collecting hearts. The rage of the Keyblade releases those hearts. They gather in darkness, masterless and free, until they weave together to make…Kingdom Hearts. And when that time comes, we can truly, finally exist," said the no-longer-a-mystery man I now knew as Saïx. Then, Lord Xemnas took over,
"I would like to welcome our newest member, Zilexa, number XIII!"
After the formal meeting, I walked around and socialized with my fellow Organization members. I met several, including Axel, a fiery redhead with teardrop-shaped marks under his stunning, green eyes, Luxord, a blonde British card player and mischievous gambler, Demyx, a musician with a dirty blonde, spiky mull-hawk, and Xigbar, an old sharpshooter with a huge scar on his cheek that was missing an eye. One in particular, Larxene, a blonde woman with two spikes in her hair like antennae, seemed to hate me. Later, I retired to my room and went to bed.
Okay, I know that was really boring, but it's a start. I've already written 21 pages. It gets better, trust me. Review please!