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she sighed.

"God this is taking forever," She told her friend. They had been in this line for almost an hour now. She didn't even want to come if it wasn't for her love struck friend, Best friend.

"Clair," her friend replied annoyed. "Stop complaining, I went to the Eminem concert with you and did not complain as much as you are doing now."

Clair sighed again.

"I did not complain through the concert, they weren't bad at all. It's the fact that we've been in this stupid line for over an hour now," she complained even more. "Come on Jenny, you'll meet them the next concert, I'll buy tickets."

Jenny turned around and glared at Clair, her brown eyes burning Clair's blue ones.

"Clair shut the hell up and be nice, we're almost there," She hissed dangerously. Clair rolled her eyes.

"Fine, whatever." She took her iPod out and put some rap on. She started dancing to it.

It wasn't that Clair Mathews didn't like the Jonas brothers. She actually likes some of their songs but she didn't think waiting an hour long in a line for just to meet, great, and leave is sensible, Jonas brothers or not.

"Hey, HEY, turn the iPod off," she heard Jenny say. She looked in front and saw the three brothers. They were only a few people away from meeting them. Clair sighed again and took off the headphones.

"I can't believe I'm finally meeting them," Jenny said. She looked calm but Clair knew she was squealing in the inside.

"Me too, I thought they'll stop before we actually reach them," Clair said. They took another step. They could hear them now.

"Thanks."

"You guys are great."

"That awesome."

Clair rolled her eyes. Were they even paying attention to anything anyone's saying? She didn't think so. The girls leaned for them to hug. Clair chuckled and smirked, an evil idea coming to her head.

"Now Clair, I know that look," Jenny suddenly said. Clair looked down innocently at her. "Don't do anything stupid, please."

"I wont do anything stupid," Clair replied innocently. She reached to her backpack and pulled a cookie dough-flavored lip-gloss, slumped it on her rosy lips and smirked.

"I hate you."

Clair only smiled. Their turn came. Jenny was in front of her, so she got to greet them first.

"Your music rocks," she told them. She hugged Kevin briefly and went on to Nick. Then, it was Clair's turn. She made sure to sway her hips a little and put on her seductive smile on.

"Hey, love you music," she sweetly said. She leaned for a hug, making sure that her lips were near his nose.

"Wow, you perfume smells cool," He said. Clair smirked.

"I think you mean my cookie dough-flavored lip-gloss, they're yummy too," she said. "Wanna taste it."

She leaned in until their faces were inches apart. She tried to keep her face straight the whole time. Kevin turned red tomato.

"Um, uh!" he mumbled.

"Come on, you need to go faster." Clair looked around at the big security dude and smiled.

"Sorry," she said. She turned around and walked to the youngest, Nick. He was looking down the whole time and he looked so innocent that Clair didn't even dare to try something with him.

She moved to the final brother.

A smirk and two playful eyes surprised her.

Looks like she was going to have fun after all.

"Hey beautiful," he told her. She looked up at him and put her seductive smile back on.

"Hey back ach ya sexy." She could see the shock buried under his perfect face. She leaned in for a hug.

"You know I don't mind trying that lip-gloss of yours," he whispered to her. She raised her eyebrow. "But not in the public."

"And when are you taking off tonight?" she asked.

"We're not. We have a radio show tomorrow then we're taking off," he replied. They pulled back from the hug.

"Blake's night club at 11 tonight." She gave him a wink and left, Jenny following her.

"Ah, I can't believe you asked Kevin to taste your lip-gloss!" Jenny said, annoyed and shocked at the same time. Clair rolled her eyes.

"I knew they wont actually do it," Clair said. "They're too innocent."

"And you hugged Joe for about a moment, you should've seen the glares that were sent at you," Jenny continued. Apparently, she wasn't even listening to Clair.

"Well, I invited him to the club tonight."

"And I kindaof saw your lips moving did you… wait what did you say!" Clair looked down at her an inch shorter friend and laughed.

"You heard me Jenny," she said.

"You invited him!"

"Yes."

"Holy shit, your crazy."

Clair laughed.

"I don't think he'll actually come Jenny, I would be surprised if he did," she said. Jenny rolled her eyes.

"You do realize you have a boyfriend, don't you?" Jenny asked, rising an eyebrow at Clair. Clair laughed.

"So! I was having some fun."

"And that boyfriend of yours will be at Blake's!" Jenny cut her.

"Oh for heavens sake Jenny, loosen up a bit will ya," Clair said. "Now, can we hurry please, I don't want to be late for the party."

Jenny rolled her eyes again and opened the door so they could step outside. The weather was a bit cold but not enough to wear a coat. They walked to mini purple cooper.

"I still can't believe you bought this car!" Jenny exclaimed. Clair chuckled.

"Will ya just enter it and shut up," she told Jenny, Jenny obeyed and entered the car.

"I mean purple!"

"I like it, and its mine," defended Clair. "Besides its my favorite color."

She started the engine and pressed on the gas. The entire ride to the club, Jenny was singing. Clair didn't blame her. The Jonas brothers do know how to pump up the crowds, and even though Clair would never say it loudly; it was one of the best concerts she had ever been to.

They stopped in front of a fancy looking building. The music was so loud and the sound of people dancing and jumping was heard from outside. Clair and Jenny stepped out and went the entrance. Clair checked the people in front of them and smirked. None were going to enter.

Only cool dressed people can enter the club.

As she anticipated, none were allowed in. it was Clair and Jenny's turn.

Clair was wearing a purple halter neck shirt, a mini black skirt with black legging, and purple boots. Her black hair was put down on her slender shoulder. Her make-up wasn't over done but wasn't invisible. Jenny was wearing a red summer dress, ripped jeans, and high heels. Her brown-blonde hair was pulled up in a messy bun. Her smoky eye shadow made her look dark with her brown eyes.

"Ah. How can I prevent two beautiful girls like you from entering?" the security said. He opened the door for them. As soon as they entered, a girl pulled them aside.

"We thought you'd never come," screamed a blonde girl that Clair recognized as her friend, Laura. Even though she was screaming, Clair could barely hear her. The music was so loud. The air was heavy. But Clair liked it like that. Jenny stepped closer to Laura and said something to her ear. Laura pointed forward and mentioned for them to follow her.

They did, and on the way, Jenny took a beer while Clair rolled her eyes. Laura led them somewhere in the back. A group of people was setting on a table in the corner. As soon as they saw Clair and Jenny, they grinned and mentioned for them to sit down. There were five guys and two girls.

Jake Scott, who was also Clair's boyfriend and Laura's twin brother, had shaggy blonde hair and dark brown eyes. He was wearing baggy pants and a shirt that had a picture of a skull on it.

Riley Richmond's "Emo" was Laura's boyfriend and Jake's best friend. His whole style, from his hair to his clothes to his shoes was Emo.

Brandon Fletch, the quiet mysterious guy in the group. His high marks make him a nerd. His natural talent at sports makes him a Jock. His sliver-blonde hair and his killer green eyes make him the popular boy in school.

Simon Jordan, a huge rapper and a big fan of Oprah (but will never admit watching the show) was the best dancer in the group. His Afro black hair and his sucker smirk make every girl who dances with him melt.

Adam Rodney is the absolute nerd in the group. He gets along well with Brandon. He is shy and normally stays alone. He is an average looking guy.

Jean Bones, a heavyset girl who was a lot of fun. A lot of guys fall for her sense of humor and her confidence. She has long black hair that reaches her mid back. Her cute smile is the best thing about her. Her style is tomboy-ish.

Bailey Prute is your typical underdog girl. Her brown wavy hair was recently cut short. She enjoyed writing and reading so much. She has such an imagination that makes her able to make five different characters on the Internet to trick the boys when Clair once dared her.

Their group was pulled together in their junior year. They might not always hang with each other but in places like this, they do.

"Clair, Jenny," Jean Exclaimed. "How was the concert?"

"Oh, well first," Jenny started dishing everything to the girls. Simon was already up and dancing around, and Adam was with Brandon by the bar. Clair sat next to Jake. He put his hand on her shoulder and leaned in, kissing her neck. Clair turned her head so that his lips could meet hers.

His lips were rough and demanding. Clair laughed.

"You act as though we haven't kissed for years," She told him between kisses. He chuckled.

"Well, it does feel like that," he said and kissed her again. His tongue ran across her lower lips and forced her mouth to part. His hand went up her head and pulled her closer to him.

"Will you two get a room," Clair heard Bailey say. She smiled and pulled away.

"I would if she would," Jake said. The girls chuckled. Clair hit him.

"Is that what you only think of?" she asked. He smirked and stood up taking her with him.

"Nop, I think about dancing with you too," he told her. Clair rolled her eyes and pulled him to the dance floor. It was a little bit crowded but Clair had been to a much more crowded clubs.

"So whose doing this party anyways?" she asked Jake as they started dancing to "Push".

"Some rich guy called something," he answered. She giggled. They danced a few dances before Clair went back to the table and Jake went to bring drinks for the whole group.

"So is there an after party?" Clair asked Laura. Laura smirked and nodded.

"I heard the Rich dude whose throwing this party was kicking us all out at exactly midnight," said Laura. Claire turned in shock.

"You're joking!"

"Nop, apparently his parents wont let him stay later," Bailey said. Clair looked at her other friend and giggled.

"Dude that's hilarious," Clair said. "My aunt doesn't even care if I don't go home for days if I keep sending her text messages saying I'm ok."

"Holy shit." Everyone on the table turned to look at Jenny.

"What?" Clair asked. Jenny looked around slowly at Clair and pointed to the door. Clair's eyes darted to the door but saw nothing.

"What?" she asked again. But Jenny didn't do anything but point. Clair look again and this time she saw it.

The Jonas brothers, all of them, were standing by the door.

"Holy shit," this time it was Clair who said it.

so yeah.. thats it... its not too long but hey tell me wacha ya'll think!!

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