Ayye BxDri here and I uploaded to see how you guys will like it. I'm pretty much a newb when it comes to writing so take it easy, but all criticism is welcomed! :D
Lost Kite's
As if Ino expected to see, rather like hearts, a lost pair of kites hurrying toward the horizon she finally took her gaze away from the sky to set her sights on the wall's of her boarding school. Ino and Sakura created kites the same day her parents spotted them, but the kites slipped from there grip out of surprise and fear; it holds deep symbolism for her. She was sent here out of hopes of being 'fixed' or out of fear she didn't know. Sometimes Ino would pray and hope that one day she would be able to set her eyes on the beauty once more. As she made her way back towards the building she spotted her friends Temari and Tenten, but didn't acknowledge them, even when they called out to her. Ino felt as if today was just meant for her to reminisce. It has been a year since she seen Sakura and letters can only go so far. Ino's depression showed more and seemed to weigh her down. It seemed futile for her to cry. So instead Ino walked towards her room grabbed her equipment and made her way back outside where she came encountered with the rest of her school. Ino was so caught up in her thoughts she forgot all about the mock war today. Not feeling up for the game she hastily made her way to the back of school to try and stay hidden. She sat there in the shadows and while looking up at the now orange and red sky she knew that something's change and some don't. As she continued looking up she searched, once more, for the two lost kites waiting for them to come down.
I see myself as a bad writer, but I have so much free time just tell me what I could do to change it or if you have any idea's inbox me. I'm very open-minded.