Ok so jus to let you all know this is a WIP story, to put it simply I'm still editing this, story wise that is. There should hopefully be no spelling mistakes but it probably has bad punctuation and improper grammar/word usage and such, I really just scrawled this out as the ideas came to me then edited as well as I currently could.
I haven't been able to find a proper beta reader or anyone who knows about bionicles and would understand what they're reading. So if you do comment on this please make them useful, I'd prefer not to get comments about how terrible of a writer I am and how I should go kill myself and Yada Yada Yada, whatever those types tend to say, can you just tell me want you don't like and how you feel I should fix it? If so, thanks! If not then, whatever do as you wish./strong/p
