A/N: Ok its my first one...the ancient isn't very good how I make it...I just need you reviewing telling me what I did wrong. Cause...that will make it better , that means I accept flamers in this story =) it will be 3 chaps , at least.
Anyway for my disclaimer : I do not own Sweeney Todd the movie or any of the character in the story.
Ok here's this thing:
" Example" --- that means that person is saying something out loud
'Example' ---means thinking it
Example -- Narrator
(1) / (2) ---- if you see this beside a word that means after the story there be an authors note about it.
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The bell on the door rang in the pie shop to let Mrs. Lovett know that some one has come in. Mrs. Lovett walked over to her counter and put some pies in the oven.
Mrs. Lovett looked at the gentleman and smiled. " Wha' ya 'ave Mister? "
"I'm in need of a shave, Mr. Todd, is he here?
Mrs. Lovett rolled her eyes " Yes, Mr. Todd is here. Hes in the room upstairs..."
"Thank you miss. " Then the man made his way up stairs to Sweeney's parlor.
Mrs. Lovett shook her head. ' Did the man not see the sign that pointed upstairs? Does anyone anymore?! I guess I need to make it bigger...means more money...Well the man should be gone any minuet now...I should go down to the bake house and wait -'
-- In Sweeney's Parlor ----
" No one has been in 'ere for weeks, no customers means no meat pies to make, and when there's no meat pies to make that means Mrs. Lovett is unhappy, and when Mrs. Lovett is unhappy I - wait...wha do I care? I don't - at all...." Sweeney Todd was having a discussion with himself when a customer came in.
" Are you Mr. Todd? " The man asked
Sweeney smiles " Yes, in need of a shave sir? Come, come! Sit, I guarantee the closest shave you'll ever have. " Sweeney Todd went and sharpened is razor , put the shaving cream on the man and brought the razor close to his neck, was getting closer when someone came in the door. Sweeney Todd growled inside. ' Who is it now?! I really want to- " He looked up and saw the Judge. Inside he smiled widley. Sweeney Todd decided he could make an exception for this man. But the Judge...he'll kill 'em right away.
" Hello, Sir " The Judge said as he took a seat and waited.
Sweeney Todd nodded and shaved the man present.
--- With Mrs. Lovett --
' Is Mr. T actually letting the man go? 'Mrs. Lovett thought to herself as she heard the man walk away from above. 'He knows we need the money...ugh that man... the time I actually need him to he doesn't!' She shrugged and went back up to her pie shop. ' I'll go see Mr. Todd and ask him what he wants for supper. ' So she made her way up to see Sweeney Todd.
-- Sweeney---
" It's you're turn now, Sir. " Sweeney Todd said as he walked over and helped the Judge take off his coat. Sweeney Todd went a sharpened his razor again just to make it extra sharp so - . " Could you hurry. I have to meet with someone. " While Sweeney Todd was sharpening is razors hes smirked
" Yes, Sir, I will make it fast. " Sweeney Todd put the shaving cream ( A/N: Ya know ...that white stuff...) on and -
" Mr. T. wha- you like for- " Mrs. Lovett started and then stopped as seeing who was in the chair. Sweeney Todd glared at Mrs. Lovett and nodded for her to go away. " I-I'm sorry, I'll wait." So she left and went to the bake out to wait for she knew he was defiantly gonna kill 'em.
' Gosh, women have the worse timing- ok back to the Judge. ' Sweeney thought
" I asked you to hurry Mr. Todd. " The Judge spoke
Sweeney Todd smirked " Hurry? Yes, Sir. " Sweeney Todd leaned down,and was just about to kill e'm when Anthony, of all people come in once again.
" Mr. Todd...." Sweeney glared at him
"What?! "
" I was wanting shave too. " Sweeney growled inside, but then he got an idea.
Sweeney walked over to the door " Oh Anthony , looks like you didn't shut it all the way. So Sweeney "pushed" it closed but secretly locked it. Sweeney Todd smirked and walked back over to the Judge. Then Anthony stood up.
" What?! "
" I should go down and have one of Mrs. Lovett's pies. " Sweeney rolled his eyes.
" Yes, yes. " Well there goes the plan of killing 'em.
Then the Judge stood up and wiped is face. " Mr. Todd I told you to be fast. I am very late for my meeting ....I shall leave now. " Anthony went to open the door but it was locked.
" Mr. Todd...the doors locked. "
Sweeney Todd gave a nervous look. " Um...ya it locks by itself some times. "
Apparently they believed him and Sweeney Todd unlocked the door and both Anthony and the Judge left.
-- With Mrs. Lovett--
Once again she heard foot steps going out the door and saw the Judge walk away " Now he couldn't have let the Judge go...." Mrs. Lovett thought " Or could he? I shall go check on him" Suddenly Mrs. Lovett herd a big ' thump'
" Wha was that?" Then Mrs. Lovett ran up to see if he was ok, but when she got there he was no where to be found. She looked around and then outside. She saw Toby sweeping outside.
" Toby! "
" Yes mum? "
" Did you happen to see Mr. Todd come out? "
" No, just the Judge. "
"Mrs. Lovett frowned and walked back the room. " Mr Todd? Where are you? " Then she noticed something odd...his chair was leaned back and the door on the floor was open. "No...he didn't....did he fall? " She ran over and yelled down. " Mr. T? Are ya down there? "
No answer,but then there was a slight moan, Mrs. Lovett began to panic and then ran down to the bake house. She opened the door to find Sweeney Todd laying there on the floor, there was a lot blood around his head.
"Mr. T!! Mr. T are you all right? Please answer!" Mrs. Lovett slightly shook him ' He's not dead is he?! ' She checked his pulse, he wasn't breathing. " Mr. T!! No!! " Mrs. Lovett stood up and ran to call the doctor.
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A/N: I'm sorry if its really bad....I wrote it when I was sick.....And one thing....does this look like its to short? anyway reviews are appreciated. =) An criticism as well, cause...I need to know what I'm doing wrong ^^ Oh and I dont own Sweeney Todd or its characters. and this story is to my friend Hannah.