MISS MAGGIE!
I had to write this for my lang arts class,so I was trying to figure out what to write...then BAM! :D I thought,MAGGIE! Back to the Future! So here we go! The parentheses mean that it's not really part of it, but it's an alternative to the paragraph above it. I wonder if my teach realized the reference to BTTF III! ^^
Miss Maggie was a careful kind of person.
What I mean is she never allowed her children near non-family members.
For example, she was suspicious of the teen her husband was helping, calling him "strange".
Miss Maggie was a young woman,only around 30. She had curly dark brown hair,and she always wore long skirts.
(Miss Maggie was had hair the color of a tree and wore long skirts.)
(MARTY POV)Miss Maggie was a bit rude to me at called me strange when I played with her baby,and was cross when her husband Sheamus offered me food and a hat. Pretty Heavy. But she was just looking after her kid,and she warmed up to me later.
(Unlike Sheamus,Maggie was wary of any and all strangers. She didn't trust Marty (the teen Sheamus brought home), or Clint as he called himself.)
So there you go! My teach graded it as "Wonderful! 20/20!" :D
I'm gonna continue on with other characters,too. :)
Please R&R! Constructive criticism is welcomed,please no flaming, cuz I'll just roast my yummy marshmallows on it ^^!
P.S.I usually hate constructive criticism,cuz I hate being told what to do, but for this, because it was an assignment,I may need a bit of editing. KEEP IN MIND! There is a big difference between putting someone down and helping them out.^^
Have a nice day! :)