My first FanFic Based On Fallen by Lauren Kate. Its my first ever fanfic and I would like honest and brutal reviews :D
Hope you enjoy ... What I portray as the night with Luce and Trevor.
I don't own these characters.
"Luce" His eyes were set on me. It was nerve racking the Shadows had been there all evening. They watched me like I couldn't be trusted, like I was their prey.
"Trevor, look I need to tell you something..." My voice was barely a whisper but he looked at me quizzically. I knew he had heard but I couldn't continue. They had been threatening to harm him all night, toying with him, making me suffer and worry.
"Luce, I read your file at school. I know you were on meds but no matter how crazy you are... I still love you and always will." I was about to ask why he had gone through my file and how but he turned away and looked at the sky. Following his gaze the stars glimmered. I know it sounds corny but they twinkled like diamonds until... It wasn't right I couldn't see them any more something had blocked my view.
"Trev, I REALLY want to go inside... It's cold all of a sudden." I couldn't hide it... I wanted to scream and drop to the floor; I wanted to be normal and to fall in love without endangering someone. Looking at Trevor I knew this was wrong... I didn't love him at all my heart was taken and at that point I didn't know why although I knew whoever it was it must have been an angel. Yet I had to protect him. Walking slowly back to the cabin I took hold of his hand and pulled him inside.
Before I could shut the door the shadows violently slammed it shut and blew out the candles placed inside earlier. He let go of my hand and I could hear his footsteps as he made his way to the other side of the room.
"You alright Luce? I'm trying to fin..." But he never finished his sentence. There was a violent smash and a startled scream. The candles lit up again and I could see Trevor the cut on his head was severe from the vase now in pieces on the floor. I couldn't speak or scream the shadows whirled and spun in a twisted and lethal dance. Even more violent than ever they tipped over a cabinet. I hurled myself in a corner I wanted to hide I didn't care about the fact that I might die right here tonight. Twisting and turning so graceful and flawless they tipped the candle over and I watched it drop to the ground lower and lower till a burst of flames erupted. They were prettier then I expected if only Trevor wasn't screaming the scene might have been blissful then they all went black all I could hear were Trevor's dying words.
I'm sorry I couldn't return the feeling and I'm sorry that you fell for me. Death is in my path wherever I walk ... There's just no escape.
I hope you enjoyed it.