* Represents the part of the story was writen by Kristen.
~ Represents the part of the sotry was written by Laura.
Nanashi
Prologue
* Drip...drip...drip...Murky water dripped from the walls of the cave. The dark rock shone dully green, it's once crystal-like walls twanged with algae. They musty floor of the cave was damp, and crawling with insects. A small figure lay in the darkness, shivering with coolness of the cave.
The long, red hair sprawled across the rocks would be gorgeous, but it had long since tangled and matted, the beauty all faded. The brown eyes were hazed; the figure no longer herself. Although the pupils wee contorted with hatred and malice, the eyes still shone.
The figure slowly turned to the subtle light in the cave. Although the source of light was dim, the figure's face lit up miraculously. The brown eyes were hardened, although they had been kind eyes coated with misery. The red hair shone, regaining the little beauty it had. The curves of the face, the nose, the chin, the cheeks, and everywhere else were now sharp and determined.
The person's body was thin because of the low food sources. Ragged clothing clung loosely, daring to slip off any moment of the person. Their torn feet and hands were lying relaxed on the ground. Ami was the name of this person.
Ami was a young, playful girl who had been clearly pushed into this cave. The entrance was covered with rocks, desolating any escape. The many years of entrapment had changed the girl completely. Ami had transformed, yet anger and exhaustion had changed her.
The fierce will of the girl burned wildly in her chest. She had vowed to avenge her wasted and torturing years in the cave. Lost time is never found, especially and unfortunately in Ami's case. "I will enforce my vow," she said. Her voice was scratchy, a consequence of no water and little use of her voice. Little need of the voice, as well.
She had no idea of who had sealed her in, but Ami knew it would probably be a person around the cave. She would strike the first man who she saw; innocent...or guilty. Unfortunately, only two innocent families and their friends lived near by; the families of Miroku and Sango, Inuyasha and Kagome, and Kouga and Ayame. Shippo lived with them as well.
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~ Represents the part of the sotry was written by Laura.
Prologue
* Drip...drip...drip...Murky water dripped from the walls of the cave. The dark rock shone dully green, it's once crystal-like walls twanged with algae. They musty floor of the cave was damp, and crawling with insects. A small figure lay in the darkness, shivering with coolness of the cave.
The long, red hair sprawled across the rocks would be gorgeous, but it had long since tangled and matted, the beauty all faded. The brown eyes were hazed; the figure no longer herself. Although the pupils wee contorted with hatred and malice, the eyes still shone.
The figure slowly turned to the subtle light in the cave. Although the source of light was dim, the figure's face lit up miraculously. The brown eyes were hardened, although they had been kind eyes coated with misery. The red hair shone, regaining the little beauty it had. The curves of the face, the nose, the chin, the cheeks, and everywhere else were now sharp and determined.
The person's body was thin because of the low food sources. Ragged clothing clung loosely, daring to slip off any moment of the person. Their torn feet and hands were lying relaxed on the ground. Ami was the name of this person.
Ami was a young, playful girl who had been clearly pushed into this cave. The entrance was covered with rocks, desolating any escape. The many years of entrapment had changed the girl completely. Ami had transformed, yet anger and exhaustion had changed her.
The fierce will of the girl burned wildly in her chest. She had vowed to avenge her wasted and torturing years in the cave. Lost time is never found, especially and unfortunately in Ami's case. "I will enforce my vow," she said. Her voice was scratchy, a consequence of no water and little use of her voice. Little need of the voice, as well.
She had no idea of who had sealed her in, but Ami knew it would probably be a person around the cave. She would strike the first man who she saw; innocent...or guilty. Unfortunately, only two innocent families and their friends lived near by; the families of Miroku and Sango, Inuyasha and Kagome, and Kouga and Ayame. Shippo lived with them as well.
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