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October 31, 1981

Longbottom Manor

Four death eaters walked up the steps and knocked on a large ebony wood door. Suddenly they heared shuffling and a muffled shout. Then the door opened and the death eaters laid waiting behind a bush. Then a foot emerged followed by a man with close cut blonde hair and blue eyes. This man was Frank Longbottom he suddenly stood in plain view wand at the ready when the pale sick green light came out from the bush to his right and killed him right there. Suddenly a death eater who seemed to be in charge spoke in a commanding feminine voice," Stay I will take her." With that she marched up the steps and into the nursery area and found a red bolt come out and miss her by inches.

She then once again spoke the words of death and the same light came out and killed the owner of what cast the red bolt, Alice Longbottom. Then she saw it the boy she was sent to kill she began to fire and as she began the spell a beam of light hit her and she felt herself begin to burn to nothing and begin to change to a spirit because unknown to most she also had a horocrux who was the dark lord himself and as long as he wasn't in deaths land she could live. She watched as the runes swirled around him for herbs, plants, earth, language, and mind. To fast for her to see then a portkey activated and he vanished. She vowed in her last second Neville Longbottom would pay.

Godrics Hollow

Lord Voldemort stood proudly outside the Potter home emitting an aura of darkness waiting for his loyal servant. He strode up the steps calmly tonight would be his greatest accomplishment ever. Tonight he would cement his rule forever while his servants took the Longbottoms, the dark lord himself would take care of the Potter children. Standing at the door holding it open with trembling hands stood Wormtail, the coward turncoat, in a rasping voice that was laced with power and darkness the dark lord spoke,"Where are they?"

Cowering with fear the servant responded to the man with the burning red eyes in a meek voice, "The Nursery m-my l-lord."

"Good now Crucio!" and with that the torture curse shot from the tip of his wand straight at the now writhing in pain form of Peter Pettigrew the great betrayer. Stepping right over his cowering body he began to slowly glide over to the Nursery. Standing in front of the door with the words "Preston & Harry Potter" nearly written in the red and gold of Gryffindor house turning around he could see his servant standing a meter back looking fearful. Calmly the dark lord Voldemort opened the door which opened with a pitiful squeak into a Nursery with white and blue walls and a ceiling painted to look like the stars then in the middle pressed against the back wall was two cribs with the names Preston and Harry written. Suddenly a thud looking down he saw a wooden toy that looked like a lion had fallen waking the children one with dull hair the color of red sand and brown eyes similar to dirt began screaming and crying hating the insufferable noise the dark lord Silenciod the child and it still screamed but no sound came out turning away he saw the other with raven hair with emerald green eyes staring at him in a way that seemed to say leave now seeing this defiant posture he knew this was the one he slowly watched as the child stood and placed one hand in front of his brother defensively. The dark lord then pointed his wand at the child and muttered the fated words "Avada Kedavra" and watched as the sickly green curse flew towards the child when suddenly a great golden dome flew up with silver, bronze, green, and blue stripes when suddenly the words came from nowhere shouting ," this child is mage blessed for his willingness to sacrifice himself." Suddenly he saw a black stipe appear and a white one they started spinning till that sickening green came out and suddenly neared him.

It hit him straight in the chest incompressible pain shot through him as his body was burned to ashes with his last moments before becoming corporeal he heard his cloak fall and his wand fall with a dull thud.

While that happened a secondary shot hit Peter Pettigrew knocking him out cold. The magical blast shattered the roof and pieces began to fall and one small piece managed to fall through the shield as the raven haired boy began to collapse from weariness and it struck the other boy putting a X shape on the left cheek of his face.

#12 Grimmauld Place

Same Time

As the order meeting began to end those who were not missing in action started to leave till Remus Lupin, Sirius Black, James Potter, Albus Dumbledore, Augusta Longbottom, and Lily Potter all sat down and began to talk. " Where is Frank and Alice Augusta?" inquired Dumbledore.

"The house watching little Neville." came her reply

"Lily I assume the boys are with Pete-" when suddenly a shrill piercing noise was heard and then a boom was heard. Dumbledore shot up and shouted, "Augusta and I will head to the Longbottom residence death eaters have gotten in everyone else the Potter home has the dark lord in it!"

With those words people shot out of their chairs and began to apparate out one by one. Mrs. Longbottom and Albus made it first when suddenly there was a flash of green light and Augusta fell dead. Dumbledore quickly threw a stunner at three different locations. He walked up the steps and saw Frank Longbottom dead up higher he saw the cloak and wand of Bellatrix Lestrange and a pile of ashes and then lay Alice's body with lifeless eyes in the crib he saw magical traces of a portkey. He quickly realized what "happened" and dashed out while sending a patronus to the ministry.

He arrived at the cottage and saw a crying set of four. Albus said, "Quickly he still could be there" in a broken voice as he looked at the destruction in front of him. The roof was gone and the walls were charred black with ash he mustered hi courage as the sobbing four walked behind him. He walked to the nursery and saw a collapsed roof every where but a circle that surrounded the crib where inside that circle was an unconscious Peter Pettigrew who's rolled up sleeve showed his dark mark and the cloak and wand of Voldemort. Dumbledore looked at the crying form of Preston and the sleeping form of Harry and made a giant mistake. When the four entered the room they saw Albus holding a crying Preston and watched as he raised him high and proclaimed," I give you Preston Peter Potter the Boy Who Lived!" Upon hearing that James and Lily burst forward crying out,"Are you sure?"

Dumbledore responded with the reply of," Why yes look he has a scar from the ordeal and was wide awake when I came in here."

Sirius and Remus began looking for Harry an found him sleeping peacefully and neither noticed the runes of magic, power, animals, elements, language, and mind that were now on his shoulder. As his parents continued to talk about Preston who became quiet as he realized all the attention coming at him.

James shouted, "Woohoo look at my son."

Lily said quickly," Wait where will we live?"

James still jumping while Sirius and Remus sat and watched said," Potter Manor of course where else would the boy who live go?"

"Oh would you be willing to take Neville?" questioned Dumbledore as the Potters jumped up and down.

Hearing that the suddenly stopped jumping and looked at him they then looked deep in thought for three minutes till Mr. Potter proclaimed, "I guess we have to since he is my godson." And they began to jump around again shouting Preston.

k so that was my first fan fiction chapter ever I feel accomplished Review please.

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