Hey guys! I decided to delete the story and add a few things to make a bit more sense since my mind came up with an idea of the stories progression as I was writing Chapter 2. Thankyou for reviewing, favouriting and following the story when I last posted it! I totally didn't expect that. I've also renamed the story (previously Too Much Punch).
Chapter blurb – Elsa has been busying herself preparing for the highly anticipated ball where the suitors will present themselves and begin to get the Queens affections. Anna isn't happy about the whole situation, Elsa is oblivious to Anna's inner turmoil as she herself is struggling with her own. Her solution being to distance herself from her sister.
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The Start Of Something
Anna had barely seen Elsa these past 2 months. She had been busy planning the highly anticipated ball. Now, usually Anna looked forward to these social events as it was filled with lots of delicious food (especially chocolate), dancing and lots and lots of wine. But this ball was going to be different, Elsa was of age now and the kingdom required an heir. Yes, you guessed it. At the upcoming ball Anna would have to hide her jealousy and watch the suitors that were on the guest list dance and flirt with her sister, in an attempt to gain her affection. If that wasn't enough torture, she would then have to sit through an archery tournament that spanned 3weeks due to the endless number of suitors!, where no doubt they would show off to no end. You know, puffing their chests out like a puffer fish and flexing their muscles…
The thought alone made Anna want to spit fire. Since "The Great Thaw" everything had been perfect. She and Elsa had been spending time together, reconnecting after so much time apart. It had been almost a year since then and over time Anna had developed these strange feelings. She wasn't sure why because being in love with your sister is so wrong, yet Anna was left wondering why it felt so right. Whenever she saw the Queen she got butterfly's and acted even clumsier than usual…if that was even possible. Anna would find herself staring unknowingly, earning a questioning look off of her sister but she just said she was thinking about Kristoff. Since the meeting though that posed the need for a king and heir, their relationship changed. Since that night where Elsa had been told the reason for the ball Elsa was always busy with "Kingdom matters" as she always put it, leaving Anna to amuse herself. Anna couldn't help at feel that deja vu feeling, her sister was shutting her out again and she had no idea why, more importantly she did not like it! Surely her feelings for her sister weren't that obvious, not that Elsa would notice anyway..since she's always "busy".
I need advice Anna thought to herself. And there's only one person that came to mind that she trusted enough to ask. "KRISTOFF" she exclaimed rather loudly, earning her funny looks from the servants around her. After all he was raised by love experts she reasoned.
"Kai" she called
"Yes, your highness" he said as he bowed politely
"Please have someone fetch me my horse" Anna instructed "I shall be in the courtyard shortly"
"Certainly princess" he bowed again and then turned on his heal to find the stable boy.
Anna headed to her room to change into her riding gear and then headed down to the courtyard where her beautiful grey mare was ready waiting for her.
She mounted and was about to leave when she heard her name being called.
"Anna"
She turned to see the Queen standing just a few feet away. "Where are you going?"
She looks beautiful Anna thought. She let her eyes trailed down to the Queens lips; I wonder what they feel like, they look so soft and oh I bet they taste good too.
"ANNA"
Anna was snapped back to reality at the sound of her name. A blush appeared on her cheeks as she realised she had staring. Anna recovered her voice and managed to form a short sentence.
"Im uh" Anna began. God she's gorgeous, wait what! Anna snap out of it. "I'm going to see Kristoff" Anna finally managed to say.
"Oh! Ok. Will you be back in time for supper?" the Queen asked
"I don't know" Anna replied. And with that she kicked her horse and headed off to see Kristoff.
However in her haste to leave, she did not see the fallen face of the woman she left standing in the empty courtyard.
Conceal, don't feel, don't let it show Elsa repeated her old mantra "She can never know" With that the Queen turned and strode back into the castle to oversee the balls final preparations.
Ok! So there's chapter 1! I've added a bit on so hopefully chapter 2 will make more sense now!
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