I'm taking a quick break from my stars story to post this one-shot about Jill and Chris inspired by my favorite gospel song "you were on the cross" by Matt Maher, it's so beautiful. Again NO FLAMES!! But constructive criticism is appreciated.
Thx, Radar
PS: I own nothing
While Chris and Jill were lying in Chris's bed, their hands intertwined, listening to Chris's stereo. "Oh please skip this song I can't stand metal" Jill said. When the next song came on suddenly perked up 'oh crap! I forgot about this song' he thought as the sweet melody of a piano came on.
"Lost, everything is lost
And everything I loved before is gone
And everything I've loved before is gone
Alone, like the coming of the frost
And a cold winter's chill in my stony heart
Where were You when all that I've hoped for
Where were You when all that I've dreamed
Came crashing down in shambles around me
You were on the cross
Pain.
Could You take away the pain
If I find someone to blame
Would it make my life seem easier
Alone, all my friends are asleep
And I can't find anyone to stay awake with me
And where were You when sin stole my innocence
Where were You when I was ashamed
Hiding in a life I wish I'd never made
You were on the cross
My God, my God
All along, all along
You were on the cross
You died for us
All along, all along
You were on the cross
Victorious
All along, all along
You were there in all of my suffering
You were there in doubt and in fear
I'm waiting on the dawn to reappear
When Chris looked down he saw Jill looking up at him with tears in her eyes. "That was B-beautiful." She mumbled. "it was the only song that kept me sane while you were gone" Chris told with tears rolling down his face as he reached over and pulled her into a loving embrace, "And I'm never going to lose you" he said strongly before kissing Jill softly. "I love you so m-m-much Chris" Jill told him as she let her tears fall freely. "I love you to, Jill" he said before he yawned and fell asleep, Jill looked up one more time and kissed his forehead before relaxing into his embrace and falling asleep.
This was really a joy to write. ^.^
