Against the world

by Emighost

Everyone in the Dauntless faction thought Al was dead. But what if the body was never found? What if, instead of dying, he got unconsciously dragged by the river. What if the river took him out of Chicago and in the wild where the unknown is dangerous.. And what if he got found by a young and very quiet girl named Callie..

1. Prologue

Prologue.

"Get up!" The big guy spat at my ears.
"We're were for training! Stop being a pussy!" He went on.
I sighed, feeling my body aching as my throat burned. I tried to get back on my feet but it just felt worse.
"You've got to be kidding me..." Mumbled the guy as he took me by my arm and stood me up.
I brushed the dust off myself with my hands in a swift movement. I looked at the guy who just kept yelling at me for being slow and fragile, he was a very tall man with a pretty good tan, his body was perfectly shaped, perfectly build. It was a body that boys would envy and that girls will drool of. His force was what made him one of the most respected man in the village, he could lift anything without frowning or whining, he saved at multiple reprise the village from attack of the shadows that were lurking around our home. It was very easy to recognise him though, he always wear his jacked which was full of mystical marks and there were lots of feathers hanging around the jacket and you'd never see him without his personal spare with the string hanging from it, which was holding a little bottle.
Compared to that powerful man I was just a midget, a nobody. But it wasn't a big deal to me, I got used to it.

Just like I got used to being his companion, his girlfriend.

Note from the writer:

Hi guys, so I am new here as you can see.

I actually post stories on another site which is called "Quotev" and a friend of mine told me I could try this site out for my Divergent fan-fiction..so why not ?!

Basically I am going to upload on both sites for each chapters. But what I might add on the other side are images such as sketches from how the village looks, or how my characters look. That'd be all ..

So here's the link to the other site if you ever wanna check it out: story/3235072/Against-the-world/1/

Also here are some of the main characters that will be revealed:

- Callie White

- Albert a.k.a Al

- Belle

- Edward a.k.a Ed

The story will keep changing point of views from Callie to Al, or even maybe someone else..

This is my first serious story, which means it's a book I want to finish before Summer 2014 starts. I might not reach it but that's already something.

Bare with me for the rest of the chapters and help me improve the story if you can alright? Thanks everyone 3 !