Yeah another new story... I promise I'll update the other ones, maybe later. This is a revenge story. So in this story Fine is very fat and gross okay, don't hate me, she's only ugly in the prologue, later she's really pretty. This is a Shine story. It's really short, not the whole backstory. Also Fine changed her name to Fine her old name is Florana, if you guys get confused.
Prologue (5 years ago)
Fine's POV
"I never thought that, you would actually go that far and actually date the fatty, Florana. I know it's just a bet but I never thought that you would actually do it." Said one of Shade's friends.
"Yeah, and I can't believe that you actually made her believe that you actually like her. Is she stupid? With that face and body, she would think that someone like you would like her." Said another friend.
"She really is stupid to believe that the most popular boy in the school would like her. I don't even think a cockroach would like her." Said the lead cheerleader.
"Yeah, yeah. We're going to be late for class. Let's go." Said Shade as he past by.
That was my first broken heart. He dated me because of a bet. He made me believe that someone like him could like me, without judging my looks. But that was all a lie, he lied to me. He made me believe that I'm worthy for someone like him.
That day my heart broke, shattered to pieces. I was no longer that happy Florana. That was the day I changed. That was the day I started seeking for revenge. He will pay for what he did...I'm going to make sure of that.
So how was that? I'm not sure if that was good. Anyways please review what you guys think and what you guys want me to change. Anyways just thank you for reading.