I've been around for 97 years now, but I'm only 17. I never really believed into vampires until I came face to face with one. He told me his name is Damon Salvatore, and I have dedicated my life to getting revenge on him. He ruined my life forever. He will feel my pain of living an entirety when you lost the one you love. I watched Damon kill my Tyler. We were in love for 3 years. I watched as Damon ripped his heart out of his chest. Little did I know Tyler was a vampire himself. I guess I should have realized something was wrong with him, but I guess I was just so high on love I didn't notice. It was the scariest thing in the world watching him fight Damon for his life. I was hiding under a bed until I saw Tyler's heart literally out of his chest. Then i herd a gasp and realized it was from my mouth. Damon looked in my direction and slowly walked towards me with a vindictive look on his face. I was afraid for my life the only thing i could hear is my heart beating louder and faster. Then I saw his face not even an inch away from mine. "It's okay sweetheart, I won't hurt you. I know I seem like a monster to you, but I'm not here to hurt you. Come on out." He said it with a sweet tone in his voice. I didn't believe a word of it, but I came out like as if I was possessed. Then I felt a tear running down my face. "Don't be afraid." he told me. Then suddenly I wasn't. It was strange like he was entering my mind and controlling everything about me. It was strange he I was face to face with a vampire who just ripped Tyler's heart out and I wasn't scared. He stood there for a second doing nothing but slowly tilting his head next thing I knew I felt a sharp pain in my neck as everything blacked out. I woke up sometime later. I opened my eyes and realized I was in a forest, it was dark and I couldn't see much, but I knew I had to get out of there as quickly as possible. I got up dizzy with hunger, I've never felt so hungry in my life. I started running occasionally bumping into a tree or two. Then after about an hour of walking i finally saw a light, it was dim, but it was light. I walked closer and saw it was someone carrying a lantern. I ran to the person got on my knees and begged him for food. He was a pretty built man, I think he was a police man or sheriff or something. He pulled out a bag of trail mix he had with him and gave it to me with a confused look on his face. I shoved all of it in my mouth as quick as possible, but that didn't help my hunger any. Then I smelt something it smelt amazing I could somehow tell this would crave my hunger. I turned back to the man and saw he was unwrapping a bandage on his leg. "What happened?" I barely managed to say over my craving. "Oh, I]its nothing." He began. When he got the bandage unwrapped I could tell that was the smell. His blood! That's when I knew what fate Damon has given me. "Its just a stab wound," He continued. I was fighting the urge to kill this man for his blood. It was hard, impossible really. "It was a fight with..." He couldn't get another word in because by that time I already had my teeth in his neck. I had a smirk on my face from doing this I felt... good? I quickly made this go away. I just killed a man! I wouldn't let myself think or feel anything. It was just to much to handle. I just ran, I didn't know where I was or where I was going the only thing I knew is I would not stop until I found Damon. I would get my revenge let him live an entirety knowing the person he loves is gone and know who did it.
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