This is the prolog from my new possible story. I always wanted to write a girl-falls-into-narutoworld-story, but one that is not overused. Today that idea popped in my head, influenced by a Supernatural episode and a fantasy book.
I promise there will be neither a mary sue nor OOCs.
Slowly Chloe walked on the bloody earth.
A slight wind blew the ash of the burned land in the air, and the smell of blood and death made Chloe almost gag, while she stepped over a huge dog whose fur had to be white originally but was now dark from dirt. A boy had his arms slung around his comrade, to be united with him even in death.
Though Chloe tried desperately not to stare on the bodies she couldn't help but doing so. The victims had different genders, different ages, they came from different countries, from different families; but they all had united for that war. For the last battle, that should bring peace to that world.
Chloe stepped in a puddle of blood that came out of the body of a girl with two brown hair buns. She held a giant shuriken in her right hand, ready to throw it, but she never had been able to do it, not before the earth under her feet had exploded and left a huge crater.
Suddenly Chloe who still didn't look up from the death shinobi and their horrified, sometimes surprised or determined expressions, felt a huge mass of chakra form itself and to be shot toward her with a growling sound. Sighting Chloe held her hand into the air and winked it to the side, in the very moment the power changed its course and exploded in a heap of bodies that were thrown into the earth or burnt to ashes. Waiting until the earth stopped shaking Chloe finally looked up.
It was hard to believe that this had been a wonderful landscape once, now it was deserted and covered with deaths. The sky was pitch black, the only source of light was the full moon that showed with his cold light the cruel scenery.
A few meters away, in a slight crater and the only spot that wasn't covered with weapons, bodies and blood stood one of the two only living things that survived the hard battle.
The beast had four large feet, a thin body, a taped hill on his back, ten waving tails with hands on the ends, and an angled head with a mouth on the front and two red-black eyes on each side.
Chloe walked closer to the creature; she almost tripped over a man with spikey silver hair, a blue ripped mask hung from his mouth while his lightless eyes watched her apologetic.
A figure jumped down from the monster and watched her coming closer from violet eyes with black circles. Chloe finally stopped in front of a lifeless boy with blond hair who had stripes on his cheek and lay a little behind a violet haired girl.
"So it's true", the figure said with a mix of boredom and curiosity, "you really just appear after something was decided. I have to admit that sometimes I was slightly worried you would change your minds and try to stop me. But it seems you couldn't do it after all."
I wish I would have stopped him, Chloe thought sadly while she stared at the man in front of her with a blank expression. The man had long spikey black hair that hung over his right eye and he wore a red armor and a shield.
"It's not about that we couldn't" Chloe explained coldly, "We're just not allowed to."
The man smirked. "I always thought that because of your rule that you don't interfere, your existence is pretty useless, but I have to admit that I'm glad about it now. Because after all this is the reason why my plans worked out perfectly."
"You lost your comrade" Chloe said but the man just shrugged it off.
"He was only a tool, a tool that wasn't useful anymore." He glanced over to the body of a young man, who had spikey hair too, but this one had large scares on his right side of his body, and his clothes were mostly ripped apart. "It doesn't matter if he's death or not, he already fulfilled his duty."
For a moment there was silent, the only noise was coming from the beast which still waved his tails impatiently and growled slightly.
"I guess that because of the fact that you didn't interfere as I killed all those foolish people you also won't do anything if I finish my work now." With a smirk he turned around to walk back to his beast. "If you want you can stay here to watch the final step of my Eye of the Moon plan… Sorry but what's your name again?" He asked politely while he kicked a boy with hair like a pineapple to the side.
"Chloe…" the young black haired lady in the white dress answered. "Don't bother yourself to introduce yourself, I already know who you are, Madara Uchiha."
The last Uchiha on earth smirked again and hopped on the head of the ten tails. "Of course you have. If I remember myself correctly, you're one of Eve's favorite subordinates, aren't you?"
Chloe said nothing but let her eyes wander over the lifeless battlefield. A boy that was pierced with a long spear, a blond haired lady who tried even in death to reach out for her fan that was a couple of feet away, a boy in a green jumpsuit and a broken leg died behind a similar looking man who was pierced with a couple of weapons as he must tried to protect the boy, the pink hair of a girl was almost burned from one of the explosions that the beast had created.
Chloe had been on many battlefields before, she had seen so many lifeless bodies, she had inhaled the smell of death more than a million times, and she had walked on burnt earth very often. And as always there was only one question that just didn't want to leave her mind: Why? Why did they let it happen? Why did no one do something against it? Why did they watch people die without helping them?
And the answer was like always the same: Because they were the Guardians of Destiny, they weren't responsible of which course fate would take. Don't interfere, just watch, never do something on your own. Chloe could almost hear Eve's voice inside her head.
Madara was right: Their existence was actually useless. Why shouldn't they change destiny if they could?
Because no one knew what the consequences would be. The whole universe could break and danger all life, their own ones included.
Chloe stared at the cold face of the blond boy. His eyes were open and even in death they showed determination, no idea that he just had lost the battle.
This world would end. Chloe knew it.
"If this is determined, it shall happen." Chloe stood once again in the clear white room, staying in front of Eve's desk. "At least it would be only one world that will end. Destiny is chosen, Chloe, you know that. And the destiny of that world is to fall. We only can take care of that so it won't take damage to the other planets."
With a deep sigh Chloe turned to Madara. He and the beast which he controlled were both facing the moon. Chloe felt the mass of chakra coming from the ten tails as suddenly the black sky turned into a bloody red.
Why? Those people wanted to protect their world; they only wanted to live in peace, but they died for nothing and now their world was about to end. An army of believing shinobi wasn't enough against an invincible, immortal, powerful Uchiha. He would continue to live forever, he would control every living thing on that planet, and he would create his own world.
Why? Why was it that bad to do something against it? This couldn't get worse!
The red now reached the moon and colored it too.
A well-built boy looked at Chloe with pleading eyes.
Help us, they seemed to say, stop him, please!
"The universe is built up on rules, Chloe" Eve had told her again and again, "of course sometimes a world will be lost, but on the long turn it will be positively. Remember this; Never, and I mean NEVER, interfere with the likes of destiny!"
Everything turned red: The ground, the bodies, the heaven, the clouds, and the moon. Chloe shivered, the light was scarier than the pitch black sky.
What would have happened if the fate of the world had been changed? What would have happened if someone would have stopped the evil before it was about to spread out? Would there be really peace now? Could peace even exist?
Chloe had lost hope a long time ago to believe that creatures would ever stop to battle and kill each other.
"I want to protect my friend! And I want to protect this world! […] So I beg you all to lend me your strength! All who feel as I do! Follow me!"
His speech was one of the bare ones which left Chloe speechless afterwards. It gave her some hope. This young boy made everyone to follow him without hesitation; he united nations and brought people together who always have hated each other before.
Chloe really had hoped that they would make it. She had hoped that they would win. She had hoped that they would survive.
But in the end they lost. They all died.
The black came back now and battled with the red of which color would dominate heaven and earth. Some of the swirling black mass concentrated itself onto the moon, and slowly but steadily it took form of the Sharingan.
This was the end of the world.
Why?
Destiny could be wrong. It could be all a coincidence.
Chloe could feel the power of the genjutsu on herself. Even though she was immune against it, her head started to hurt from the big pressure that wanted to control her mind.
Why?
Closing her eyes Chloe took a deep breath of the bad air.
She formed her own power, which was bright as the light. It surrounded her, let the darkness and blood disappear and created immediately a glowing pillar that reached up into the sky.
She saw the universe appear before her eyes, saw the planet on which she was currently glowing in red, but with the pillar of light escaping into the nothingness. She reached toward the planet that was connected to this one the most, searched the weakest spot of the powerful aura and concentrated the light onto that while she built up the connection between the two worlds.
Why?
Because with the little hope that was left inside of her, she would make sure to save the world and to change destiny.
"Come on you stupid page just load!" I screamed at the desktop in front of me that showed the upper half of the third side of the new Naruto chapter that came out this day. And that I wanted to read, now! The loading symbol froze shortly just to continue loading again.
I groaned desperately and clicked for the third time of the refresh button. Stupid internet connection in that little hick town!
"Please you damn slowly computer, just stop bullying me and let me read this fucking chapter!"
Nothing changed. It still just loaded the half of the site.
"Pretty please internet? With sugar on top?" I tried it on the polite way. Of course it didn't help either.
Sighting I closed the tab to restart that damn thing.
My name is Rachel Bauer, and like I said before I live in a hick town in south Germany. The house I lived in with my parents and my younger brother who were shopping in the moment, was old and mostly made of wood, but to be honest I don't have anything against living in here. I love the nature and I think that in a huge noisy stinky town I would go crazy! But then there are those things like a crappy internet connection that make your life sometimes a hell.
Sighting I just wanted to log myself in, as I saw out of the corner of my eyes a sudden bright light. I watched out of the small and only window in my room just to see a mass of light coming closer… and closer.
Before I realized what was going on that thing whatever it was already had reached our house.
There was an explosion, the light reached into the room, surrounded me. It was so bright that I had to shut my eyes, still asking myself what the hell was going on!
I jumped out of my bed, screaming, and run toward where was hopefully the door. But the light didn't let me go, it just grew, engulfed me until I was lost in it.
"You've got three years" a sudden female voice ringed in my ears. "Change their hearts and defeat the evil, or the world is going to end."
Suddenly the light disappeared and everything turned black.
I haven't decided yet if I'll continue this. So please tell me if you like it or not and if you want to read more. If not, I won't continue it.