(The sequel I promise, it's a short first chapter, kind of like a trailer. A test if you will. Okay, soooo, here it is)
Oh.My.God
Jude sank to the floor, leaning against the wall she sat in a daze as the test fell from her hand, landing on the floor and bouncing. Thank God they were staying in a hotel tonight instead of on the bus. SME was in the family room across the suite, thinking she had gone to bed as she sat in the private bathroom off the master bed room, starting to hyperventilate. She finally got her breathing back under control, but she was still freaking out. Fumbling a little she pulled her turquoise razor from her pocket and scrolled through the phone book until she found Sadies number. She hit the green button as she reached over and picked up the test again, praying it would have changed, but their was no such luck. It still read "positive", and she was still dead.
Sadie: Hello?
Jude:….
Sadie: Jude, come on, I'm just across the suite, and shouldn't you be asleep? I mean, after-
Jude: Sadie, come in here, now.
Sadie: Jude, what's-
Jude: Sadie, something is really, really wrong. I need you to get in here
Sadie: Okay? I'm coming
Jude closed the phone and set it back down on the cold tile as she sat, staring forward in a daze. About a minute after she hung up Sadie walked into the bathroom.
Sadie: Jude? What's wrong?
Jude couldn't say anything, she could barely breathe. Instead, as the sobs started to take over, she held up the test. Sadie stared at her, half confused and half shocked, as she took it. Jude doubled over as the sobs took over her body. She heard Sadie gasp and drop the test, then her sister knelt next her and rubbed her back. Jude leaned into her sister and sobbed harder.
Sadie: Shhhh. Jude its okay, we'll get through this
But neither of them knew how…
(What do you think? A good, dramatic beginning to the sequel? Let me know!)