Hey hey hey! Ya that's right, I wrote another story! I'm incredibly stupid I know, but ya know what? Tough shit cuz I like to write! And I will hopefully doing more of it since I'm getting a laptop! Woot woot! And it's gonna be a netbook! IN PURPLE! Take that Osama! In remembrance of the 9 11 victims, I would encourage you to have a moment of silence. ………….. Okay, grieving be gone, cuz now it's time for my story! =D
Btw, check out my other stories and poems and my two besties' accounts, Tomboy Amy and lionlambluv. They are amazing, much better than me =D (My opinion, don't kill me Amy XD)
This poem's just a preview, I'll hopefully be posting the first chapter soon =D
Disclaimer on my profile.
So now here it is:
Breaking Away
Underneath the surface,
it all keeps breaking.
Underneath the surface,
the walls are fraying.
I need to get out while I can,
maybe find someone that's worth
Being called
my man.
Somebody save me,
please God get me out,
Do I really have to beg?
Do I really have to scream
and shout?
This situation is seemingly hopeless,
I feel like I'm going to die,
maybe I should just give up,
and say some teary goodbyes.
It's happening again,
he came back for me.
Why?
Why can't he just leave me be?
Is it not enough
that he controls my life,
No matter what I do,
no matter how I try to strive,
he holds me back,
tries to take my life.
But he doesn't own me.
he never has,
never will,
I can't tell you
how much he's tried to hurt me,
tried to break me,
make me his.
But I can tell you this:
it won't happen.
I can guarantee you that.
Because dear Jacob Black,
I'm the leader of the pack.
You can't tell me what to do,
I rule this place,
This is my home,
Leave,
you're just a disgrace.
I'm taking back my life,
and you have no say.
Because dear Jacob Black,
I'm
Breaking Away.
Hehe **shuffles feet nervously** Didja like it? This is just a preview, but tell me what you got out of it. Tell me what you thinks gonna happen, I'll give a preview to who gets closest =D (Amy, you can't guess, cuz you already know what's gonna happen XD) Anyways, even if you didn't like it, review plz! I don't give a shit if you flame me, they're the most honest reviews you can get, though sometimes hurtful lolz. But I haven't been flamed yet, so woo! XD
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Love,
Locketful o' Heartache
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