Hello there. Here is a new story that popped into my head the other day. Please tell me what you think as I was a little worried that it was a rubbish story. However if you want me to continue with the story then please review or PM me and tell me what you think. If it really does suck then I beg you to tell me but if it is good then I still beg you to tell me. Thank you, x.


The BAU team was waiting for the right time to go into the house. JJ Emily Morgan and Drew,(show was some one who knew Emily from a kid who also worked with the FBI and was working with BAU team. However the rest of the team did not know that Emily and Drew knew each other), where waiting to raid the house for there unsub who kidnapped and murdered and tortured teenagers who were invisible. No one had a clue how 30 children had turned up dead, tortured and murdered and where not on the missing list. However they had managed to find the person and tonight was the night that they would arrest him to. However they did not know that they would learn a lot and have a consequence at the same time.

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They all went in on all sides of the mansion. Rossi Reid and Hotch where on one side and Morgan Emily JJ and Drew where on the other side. At the count of 5 they all wet into the house. The halls where massive and very illusion on the eyes as they made the eyes on focus often. When the team started to look around the called out a chorus of Clears.

Hotch Rossi and Reid started to move up the stairs that lead to the second floor after clearing the first floor. After checking the second floor they heard five bangs which sounded like a gun. They went up the next floor and started to find the room where their friends where. They could hear muffled noises which then turned to panicked and worried noises. They could hear the smarmy unsubs voice which meant something bad. They looked for ages and they both decided to follow the noises as the man said something which was followed by what sounded like people where trying to scream and shout but we not doing a great job at. After following the noises they found the very cleverly discrete door that held their friends. When going in what they saw shocked them all and made sense then made everyone angry.

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Emily JJ Morgan and Drew went straight to the third floor after checking the first floor. They knew the others where checking the second so went to the third. The first room they went in was clear. After checking all the rooms apart from one that was well hidden, they checked it. Morgan JJ and Drew went in first as Emily checked behind them before going in. they all went in and Morgan and JJ was shot first. Drew was shortly followed and Emily shot the Unsub and the unsub shot Emily first. They all ended on the floor. When the four stood back up and looked at each other oblivious to the fact that the unsub was watching as he had only been shot in the side which was a graze. Morgan was the first one to talk.

"Who are you?"" Morgan asked the two girls and the lad who was standing next to each other.

"Could say the same about you. Any way I am JJ and I am 17 what about you?" JJ asked

"Derek Morgan but you can call me Morgan. I am 18 nice to meet you JJ and who are you two?" Morgan asked looking at the others. JJ following suit.

"Drew Harley. 17. but call me Drew." Drew said then looked to Emily and smiled. "do you want to introduce or do you want me to?" Drew asked Emily.

"No it is fine. Hey I'm Emilyia but you can call me Emily, 16." She said shyly. They all made friends and talked about how they all managed to get here. At right that moment the Unsub made him self known by picking up his dart gun which had a substance that made there muscles stop working. He pointed at JJ Morgan and Drew and fired. Immediatley the three wnet down and was in a position where they would see the events unfold. Emily looked at the three that had just fallen down and who where like jelly. She was instantly brought back the fact that a man was starring at her hungrily. When he jumped to her she quickly moved out of the way on instinct. But she had moved in a way where she was on the opposite side of the room to her friends. She saw the man go for her again but before she could move he rugby tackled her to the ground Emily let out a scream as she fell hard on the rough floor and the bone crushing weight of the man that landed on top of her. The man quickly straddled her and said to her,

"You are the perfect one. I love brunette teenage girls. They make me hungry." he started to put his hands on her throat and pushed. "especially the part where you watch the life leave their body." the man said. With his legs either side of her and his full wieght on her lower body she had no leverage. Drew interrupted him with a very slow and slurred noise.

"Leafe er lone, leaf iy girlfrien lone." Drew tried shouting but came out more of a high pitched squeak but loud enough for the group in the room to hear. He could see his girlfriend trying to fight the evil man but all she had was her hands which where fruitlessly trying to get the man's death grip away from her throat.

The man smiled at the 17 year old boy and gave a devilish smile. He looked back to Emily who was turning paler by the second and kissed her stopping her from breathing for a few seconds. The teens who could not move one bit as their new friend was being murdered in front of them could see the growing bulge in the man's pants and gave each other worried looks. They knew that Emily could not see the man's excitation. They watched as the life slowly started to leave the girls body as her attempts weakened. But before she was completely gone he let go much to the teens relief, which was quickly wiped of their faces when they saw that Emily was only partially with them in the room and was slightly out of it as well as they man was starting to undo his pants and started to play with Emily's. They tried shouting and screaming but nothing would get the man's attention away from Emily. The man leaned down to Emily and bite her casing a quiet whimper to escape from Emily's mouth. He then pressed his rough lips to the girl under-neath him and when the girl gagged he forced his tongue into her mouth. He decided against the original thought saying

"Maybe another time", and instead pushed his hands under her clothes. On hand on the girls chest and the other under her panties. The teens had watched how the man redone his pants and instead put his hands on her. They could not see what his hands where doing and did not know the man was touching her up. All they knew was that the man was kissing their friend and saw how the girl was at the mercy of the man. Drew was furious as the man was violating his girlfriend and that he should be the one who kissed her not him.

Emily could feel what the man was doing but could not do anything about it as she was stuck and could not move her arms but her legs where trying to hit him but all attempts failed. When the man was finished touching her he removed his hands wiping them on his trousers before departing from her lips as she coughed from the lack of air that was taken from her by the horrid kiss.

The teens who had watched the whole scene saw how the man smiled to them.

"Say goodbye now." the man said before he placed his hands on Emily's throat again.

Emily's eyes widened as she struggled to breath as she felt her throat being crushed by the evil man. She tried to scream but nothing came out. She hear the door open and Drew and the other two shout to her and him to stop before the darkness over took her and her last memory of the man violating her and his evil smile before she went stopped breathing and her eyes closed body process' stopped. The man smiled giving her one last kiss but was interupted by Rossi and Hotch tackling the man of off the girl. The man went to grab Hotch's gun but Rossi knocked him out and cuffed him before giving him the police to take away. Hotch and Rossi ran to the brunette teen lying on the floor completely lifeless as the three teens that where unable to move where being moved onto a gurney. They group of teens made the man stop to watch as Rossi and Hotch try to resuscitate their friend. After several minutes of Rossi shouting to the girl to come back to them and Hotch shouting come on open your eyes sweetie and the three teens crying for their friend, they where rewarded by the girl coughing and her eyes opening tiredly. Rossi and Hotch leaned over into the girls sight smileing to the girl.

"Hey there. You gave us an arwful fright. Just keep your eyes open and we'll come and ask questions later." Rossi said. The girl nodded before the medics finally took all four teenagers to the hospital.

Ried came over to Ross and Hotch.

"we still have not found the rest. Where do you think they could be?" Reid said.

"I don't know. But I have to say that the blond and Afro-American kid looked similar to JJ and Morgan. But I would not know about the other two as for one I did not see the other lad much and the girl well I was to busy trying to get her to came back to the would again. I must say that at one point that we where too late but she is sure a fighter." Rossi said. Hotch and Reid nodded.

"Maybe they forgot to tell us that they are helping with the what ever these guys do. I will tell them to tell us if they see are guys to tell me. But for know we should go and check on those teenagers and see if they are al-right. Get there names and what happened." Hotch said . The others agreed and made their way to the hospital.

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The three of them stood at the desk as they where told the direction in which to go to get to the four teens. Luckily for the three that they had only had to go to the one room as the teens had fought to stay together. Honestly the three did not blame them as they probably needed to know that they friends was fine and luckily still alive.

As they entered the room they saw that the teens where talking and hugging and crying. The three of them announced then selves and the 3 teens turned to face them keeping eye contact but the brunette looked everywhere but diectly to them. They did not miss that which got them thinking, 'What did that man do to her?'.

"I am fine. No need to ask me any questions." the brunette said not looking them in the eye which the three profilers did not miss.

"I am from the FBI/BAU. I am Agent David Rossi. Agent Aaron Hotchner and Dr spencer Reid are here to ask you some questions. First of all I would like to know your names age and everything about you and what happened." Rossi said to the 4 teens.

"Well I'm Drew Harley, but you can call me Drew, 17." "Jennifer Jereau but please call me JJ, 17 also" "Derek Morgan, but call me Morgan, 18" "Emilyia Prentiss-Rowon, but call me Emily please, 16" The three shocked and bilwidered looked at each other also no-one missed the way in which Emily did not look them in the eye. "I think It time to call Garcia now" Reid said frazzled. Hotch nodded. Then said "at least we now where are agents are and that we saved Emily" "i did not now that Emily was called Emilyia Prentiss-Rowon" Ried said. "I am just happy that we did not give up on Emily" Rossi said after realising that it was Emily who they very nearly lost. After they saw how Ried's face paled he nodded and left the room to tell Garcia.

Rossi and Hotch turned to the teens who where sitting on the bed cross legged apart from Emily who was sitting on the bed in the fetus position. Rossi and Hotch shared a worried look as they had not missed how the group were a little cling around Emily.

"We need to know everything that happened" Hotch said.

The four teens exlpained what happened but the two of them could tell that they where missing things out and that Emily had just said about what they had saw. Realising that they would not get anything out of them. They shared a look which said 'if we want the full story we need to separate them.' look. Before they could do anything Garcia came in with an apologetic Reid.

"Ow my poor poor gumdrops and gummy bears." Garcia said as she went to JJ first giving her a hug as she was the closed to her. Followed by Morgan, Drew then finally Emily who fliniched and sat like a stick not moving when Garcia hugged her after a couple of seconds Emily hugged Garcia back. When Garcia let go she shared a look with the rest who had also saw the reaction from Emily at first but where slightly happier when she had eventually hugged her back.

They split them up into separate rooms away from prying ears.

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Hotch was with Morgan interviewing him.

"he shot me and JJ and Drew with this stuff which made our muscles stop working. The only thing that did work was our eyes and we could sort of talk if we tried to shout. When we all fell to the floor we saw that man try to grab Emily but she moved away. I think more on instinct than anything else. But then he came back for her. But this time he got her. I heard the hard thud of them landing. When Emily landed on the floor and the man landing on top of her she screamed out in pain. Before he started to strangle her, he said '

You are the perfect one. I love brunette teenage girls. They make me hungry' and 'especially the part where you watch the life leave their body'. You could see the life fading from her eyes and there was nothing I could do she was trying to get him of her but she was getting weaker every second. Then he stopped before she was unconscious and smiled at all of us. She was there but not there, if you know what I mean, like she knew what has happening around her nut too weak to stop anything. Anyway, I could see how much she excited him if you know what I mean because you could see it at his pants. He undid his and her pants then he bite her. She screamed in pain. I thought at one point that he was going to rape her in-front of me and the other two. He kissed her several times I could see Drew how was beside me was not happy but I guessed they already knew each other whereas the rest of us didn't. When I thought that he was going to rape her he stopped and said 'maybe another time'. And he kissed her again for ages. I could see Em moving her legs and trying to get him off but her arms where stuck and her legs had no affect on him. She was stuck at the mercy of that horrid man and I could not do anything to stop him. But that was not the worst. He said 'say goodbye' then strangled her before our very eyes. Then her body went limp and her eyes closed. I remember crying like the others. She was dead and there was nothing I could do. I was a complete useless fool. I cant help anyone. Even when I just met them. How stupid was I. I nearly lost a friend today because I did not look to see if it was safe around for us to do are little introductions. Argh how stupid stupid stu..."

"STOP. You had no idea that he was with you. You are 17 and not a cop of FBI agent" well that was complete wrong and you defiantly knew each other but then again you got hit with something and don't remember each other. But Drew and Emily did some how. Maybe they did not get as much? He thought. "The man is in custody so you all should be fine. Emily is alive and well. Maybe a little sore but she knew that if you could of helped her that you would. She will understand. Anyway that was all I needed. Thank you." Hotch said. Morgan stood up and went to leave but turned around to Hotch,

"Thank you for knocking some sense into me." he said before leaving the room to go back to the hospital.

Poor kids. Poor Emily. She nearly died in-front of them. We where nearly too late. Hotch thought.

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the others like Morgan and Hotch had the same information. But Garcia had a slightly different information.

Garcia and Emily.

"Is it al-right if I call you Emily?" Garcia asked carfully. She had been informed that the four Agents had been injected with de-ager which made you younger but also made you forgwt everything past the age you where. Hence why the four did not know the team or each other. Or so they thought. She knew that she had to stay with Emily as she had been let in. she had only been told the story from when the others had come in and that they where so close to have lost Emily.

"Yeah. That's fine. Or any other name you want to call me." Emily smiled while sitting on the bed instead of a defence position. When Garcia heard this she felt like squealing but decided against it.

"Okay. I think I will call you... teddy bear... no...maybe...meme, hmmm, no...I know, E, yeah E it is,... if that is al-right with you?" Garcia said hoping that it would be al-right. When Emily nodded, Garcia smiled.

"Can I call you PG then?" Emily said. Garcia nodded in delight at how quick they had become 'new' friends.

"Okay E, I am sorry but I have to ask you questions about what happened." Garcia said sympathetically. Emily who had lost what ever colour had been on her and nodded hesitantly.

"okay start from the start please"

"Okay. We had just stood but I could not remember why we where on the floor. Anyway so we started to introduce each other. Morgan was the first, then JJ and Drew then I introduced. I think Drew wondered if I should say my name or if I wanted to him to say who I was but I thought that I should. You see Drew is very protective of me. You know JJ and the tall Lanky dude well I totally think that they should get together. Like they are so cute. And Morgan is hot as well but I am already taken and I don't think Drew would want me two timing on him with a guy that I just met so that's keep that between us please? Anyway the three of them where darted with something and and they collapsed on the floor. I could tell that it must be a relaxant as they could not move and hardly talk unless they tried to shout but it came out more of a mumble or squeak. I turned around just in time to see the that man come for me and I instinctively moved to the side and away from him but he got me the second time round. When I hit the floor it hurt and then the man landed on top of me and that hurt even more. The managed to er, pin me so that I could not fight him of off me. He said something to the other three, 'You are the perfect one. I love brunette teenage girls. They make me hungry' and 'especially the part where you watch the life leave their body'. Then he placed his hand on my thought so hard that I could not breath. I … I thought,he..he was going to kill me. I tried I really did but I could not stop him" Emily said as she started to cry. She would not normally cry in-front of people except her boyfriend but she knew that she could trust PG so she did not mind telling her what happened. "when I thought that I was just about to leave my life she stopped. Is was so weak I could not even lift my finger. He was talking but I could not make sense of it. But he started to undo my pants then he bent down and bit me on my neck. It hurt. Then he said something and I could not make out what they where saying. But he kissed me several times and when I gagged he shoved his er tongue into my mouth. I remember thinking that I was going to be sick as he started to touch me. I tried to get him to stop but he was too strong. He touched me in places that only a boyfriend of husband would not some ho-horrid man would. I felt disgusting and violated. I wanted to scream but my throat was so sore. When he stopped I heard him say 'say goodbye' and I panicked when he put his hands on my throat and pushed even harder than before. I actually thought that this time I was going to die. After everything that has happened to me it was not the worst but was for the thought that I would die this time. The next thing was when two men where in-front of me saying that everything was going to be al-right. Then I was here." Emily said as she was crying.

Garcia gave her a hug as she could not believe that her friend had just gone through. The other thing that kept playing on her mind was that Emily had said that 'this time I thought I was going to die' and 'After everything that has happened to me it was not the worst'. It made her think about what she had been through as a kid as well as what other stuff had happened to her to make her think that it was not as bad as other stuff that had happened to her. This only made her worry even more. Instead she concentrated on the Emily that was in her arms letting her emotions out. After several minutes Emily stopped crying and straightened up and was within seconds the calm collected Emily again which made Garcia worry and shocked at how fast Emily could change emotions in a blink of an eye. If it where not for the fact that she had puffy eyes you would never of guessed that for the past minute or so she had cried her eyes out.

After 10 minutes Emily looked normal like nothing had happened but Garcia could see the pain in the eyes of the girl who had been violated and had suffered a lot in her time. Garcia was still thankful that Emily had not completely shut her out.

When the others came back in the 4 Agents that where still the right age went and talked outside of the room. They informed each other what they had been told by each of the teens and where completely shocked at how close Emily was to being gone or hurt even more than she already was. Garcia told them about what Emily had said to her about that it was not the worst and that she thought that she would die this time. Rossi said about the fact that Emily and Drew new each other from when they where younger as they we 'together'. This earned shocked faces from everyone but Garcia as Emily had hinted it to her.

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It has been 3 days since the indecent and the 4 teens where allowed to leave. They where taken back to Rossi mansion as there was more room. They would later learn that even if you know them that they may act different as a teenager.

Hope you enjoyed it. Please tell me what you think. Thankyou.