Disclaimer: Only this random fanfiction is mine... not the real thing
I hate my story but I keep writing it anyway. Please review and tell me my errors cause my vocab isn't the best...
I WILL stop writing if you hate it... Its all up to you!
It may be crap because it's my second/first fanfiction.
I repeat... DON'T STOP REVIEWING!
(ps. These two chapters were released on the same day)
'Without power, I am nothing' Mai thought to herself. But little did she realize, Someone loved her. His name was Joey.
Shopping at the card shop, she met Joey and Yugi, but that was not the first time, she met him ages ago but didn't realise how she felt about him. Now Yugi and Sirenity the love docters was helping...
'Joey! Here's your lucky chance! This is what you'll do...' Yugi whispered to Joey, ' She's around the equip cards, so go there and pretend to look for a card to equip to your flame swordsman. Bump into her, and she will get angry. Say sorry, and ask if you two can hang out together sometime. Hopefully she will say yes but if she says no, Beg her to. That might make her realise that you like her. GO NOW!'
'Ok ok...'
Joey walked slowly across to the equip section...
Meanwhile...
'Mai! Here's your lucky chance! This is what you'll do...' Sirenity whispered to Mai,' He's around the trap cards, so go there and pretend to look for a card to protect your Harpie Lady. Bump into him, and he will get angry. Say sorry, and ask if you two can hang out together sometime. Hopefully he will say yes but if he says no, Beg him to. That might make him realise that you like him. GO NOW!'
'Ok ok...'
Mai walked slowly to the trap section.
DISASTER NO.1
They slowly walked past each other.
Sirenity and Yugi sweatdropped.