This is my first Fanfic, so when you review please tell me how I can make it better, rated M for sexual content, language and violence

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Jesus, Elizabeth thought as she woke up from her recurring dream of that day on the sea. Her mind went back to that cursed day where her mind had told her no, but the lust for gold in her heart, commanded her to steal the gold. Will Turner, she thought, I will always love you, I'm sorry.

"Captain Elizabeth!" Shouted Anna-Maria.

"We have a score to settle, with these here dogs!

"Aright, a moment here!" Her hoarse voice shouted.

As she dressed herself a cold almost mind-bending, shiver past over her. My damned, cursed medallion! How I wish I could cast ye into the ocean to be free.

She reached for it in her drawer, clipped it on and tied on her mask. As she stepped forward into the moonlight, her pale skin became bone, and wretched pirate bones now replaced her black heart.

"Alright you mangy dogs! Let's show Port Royal, how the fleet, of the most Ferocious pirates, get our revenge!